I refuse to tell you off. It's a good fic; only I wish it were longer.

Wow. Supercool, but also super depressing. I have to say I had never thought of that before.

My compliments. XD

You're not wasting any time! This was a wonderful fic and the only thing bad about it is that it stopped.

KP

Woah. It was brilliant.

'She had cut her hair short; it hung in untidy tufts here and there around her head. Not two of the tufts were the same length. And if she'd told someone she was actually blonde, they wouldn't have believed her.'

A wonderfully descriptive sentence. You should be an author when you grow up. I'm serious. This is amazing.

waste of time? well, you're not really an optimist, are you? this isn't bad. not bad at all.

It wasn't pointless at all. I found it very intersting and original.

Uhh... nope. Sorry. It had to happen sooner or later-one I didn't like. It's not that stuff about hope, or about the yeerks ruling-that's ok. But, nope, definiatly something wrong with it, and I can't put my finger on it. Sorry.

Depressing. Clever. Very interesting.

Hmm...I like it, but it doesn't seem to have a complete ending.

That was very grim.

oooooh, I liked that - I reeeeeaaaally liked it, which means of course that now you must finish it. regal wave now, carry on old bean, there's a good chap...

Ooooo very freaky. I've got chills ( not sarcastic) dark but good.

This isn't a waste of time. This is a very good, original fic. With very good desription.