Interesting premise for the story. I like that there are elemental powers involved. Are we going to see more about Harry's wolf heritage? It appears that Tonks has forgotten the fact of the money that Harry gave away.

Excellent idea and thanks for writing.

I'd like to say to you and you can say it to anyone who brings it up again. Nothing is able to completely avoid coping some thing else in at least some aspects. With all the writings in the world it's impossible. Romio and Juliet wasn't straight from mister amazing british dood. It was a ** version of Pyramus and Thisbe which was written by Avid or is it Ovid, any way. He was a Roman who was around in the time of Caesar if I remember my teacher's speech correctly. Nothing can be totally one's own ideas. And who ever can't get over that can find a... never mind. I'm rather bloody in my imaginations. Great work on this story and the other one that I've already read.

If your saying that Harry can be traced by his wand then why did he get caught this time? He was using the stolen wand if how I followed is right.
*1* he gets the wand
*2* he points said wand at other death eater and takes his wand
*3* attacks the death eater and then binds both of them

If I'm correct then you implied that Harry wasn't using his own wand at the time.

Why would Harry give any money to the manipulative headmasturbater? The man is responsible for almost every problem and pain in Harry's life.

It's an entertaining story and one which I have enjoyed reading so far. I just want to point out a third way that the trio could've escaped: go down. Why bother going up and into an ambush when they could walk out the front door without a problem? Anyway, personally, I like the story and all flamers can f*ck off. (I'm not sure how you feel about swearing.)

Thanks for writing
C-C

like the way that went

Great story. I suggest getting an English speaking beta but your English is pretty good for a foreign speaker.

I'm glad that you have continued to write this, i enjoy reading it although i don't normally read Tonks/Harry. Yes there are mistakes and the characters out of character but so what! Its fanfiction, you have made it your own and like i said before i enjoy reading this.

I don't mean any offence but you should have progressed Harry's fall out. And he shouldn't have confessed his love in a letter.

this story is really good. i was listening to 'Faraway' by Apocalyptica while reading. the song goes perfect with the chapter.

Very powerful and emotional. However... the effect is slightly more comedic when listening to Steven Lynch's Lullaby

hello, I just wanted to leave a review and say that your story really is good. I like the way this story goes! I am reading this for a while now and ill have to say, that your grammar got worse in the way. I myself am a german student and I knpw that I make mistakes too, but I can see grammarmistakes when i see them... :) I just wanted to leave a tipp, nothing else.
as this story is already finished i cant say that you should write motr charapters... but i can say, that you deffinitly should write more harry/tonks stories. because i love the pairing and of course because your storylines are briliant.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

A good story, a bit slow at time but enjoyable. I like Tonks/Harry stories and am looking forward to reading the sequel. Thanks for sharing your story!