BEAUTIFUL! loved it espcially tha beginning. Keep writing! make another Connor fic, loving him loving ur story

Intresting ideas and an original plot! I really like this, great job, keep up the good work!

Huh. The irony in the pairing here - unbelievable. Great work. The characterisation, Dawn's as well as Connor's, was excellent ... the words "No, Buffy's" were so *there*. Dark, chilling, and ... not. The imagery - blood and more blood - was perfectly fitting.

Great job. I'm far from being a Connor fan, but ... really good work.

I like this story, it could be a good series.

Dark. Cool.