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| Craz Lollipop-Imp 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abusethat should hav been pg-13 |
| Megara1 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat first attempt !! An excellent job with well characterization of people, especially Grissom !! Megara1 |
| Taletha 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseGood job, I never suspected a thing between Grissom and Sara. Poor Catherine sure made Greg sweat it out for a minute. |
| Nerwen Aldarion 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseOh I liked it, Grissom and Sara together YEAH! |
| Ricker23 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseVery nice response to the challenge. You should definitely continue to write more! |
| mauralin13 2004-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseGo for it! Write more fics! We need as many good G/S fanfic writers as we can get - and you fit the bill! Great fic! |
| pseud0me 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseFor your first attempt, bravo. Don't give up, you've got potential. |
| Lin 2004-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, you should attempt again in future ! |
| i-luv-csi 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. Yes, you should write more fics in the future. |
| Danym 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI like those short stories that are just like a picture. If it is well written you don't need to take the long path. And yours is certainly one of them. Try Unbound again. |
| FishTank-36 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was well written. I vote for you to continue the story *grin* |
| tassiegal 2004-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! I liked it. You've got a good writing style - clear, uncluttered, easy to read. I was through the fic in no time (that's a compliment, btw). I don't really enjoy struggling thru stories that are weighed down by convoluted writing styles. Yours was right on the money. Go girl! |
| ScienceGeek 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Interesting take on the lines. |
| And Also With You 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseCute stuff! You should definitely write more. Nice characterizations. Great response! |