Miroku/Kagome CAN DEFINATELY WORK people.
Think about it.

Inuyash/Snago, not so much
after she went drunk ** on him.

How sweet

That's really sweet. Huzzah for MirKag xD

I LOVE IT!

This is perfect, and it epitomises everything I love about Miroku and Kagome. It's wonderful, and there aren't even enough adjectives to describe it at 2:17 in the morning. I love all your Inuyasha fics, though I just can't bring myself to read the Miroku/Kikyo ones, cause he belongs to Kagome!...Okies, sorries, I'm over that, ^_^, I just had to say that, cause I don't see how that pairing can be anything other than sad, cause they're the two most potentially depressing people in the series, and I like fluff. ^_^ Mostly the same goes for Sango/Kohaku, I'm just way too picky with my pairings, and though I'll try (almost) anything once, I have never seen a cheery Sango/Kohaku oneshot, and I doubt I ever will. I'm gonna try to check up on you regularly to see if you're written anything else, so keep going! Don't let me down! ^_^ *Huggles Morbidity*

Amazing. Beautifully simple. WOW.

I bow down to your greatness...

Sometimes he wonders how someone like Sango can expect love from him.

That line espeically caught my attention, and is forcing me to think. Good job!

I loved it! it was so good! you my friend are VERY talented!!

This is the first time I've actually reviewed a fanfic. I must say. I loved your one shot. Generally, I don't like short ones but this time, i couldn't help it.

:D I like it. Short and sweet. Good job.

Well, first I gotta say thank you for your reviews! I read them and was like, "MORBIDITY reviewed me?!?!?!" and subsequently died of joy.
Now, the story!
I loved this. The last line is a brilliant contrast to all the "sometimes", and makes a really powerful expression about Miroku's feelings for Kagome. This was so poetic and lovely. =]

Definently like the pairing...can't write it myself...lol...hmm...like the idea...the flow of your story here is a little choppy...grammar wise...other than that, keep it up!