Such a sad story...the way her mother died. Your portrayal of Luna's feelings were great.

*tear* that was so sad...:(

wonderful

So sad. And very realistic. This bright, happy Luna we know, with such a secret. Very well written. The old lady, the rainy London, the bacon... snap-shot images. Well done.

wow. that's all I can say. You should get some of this published. It's amazing. I'm in ae. soo sad.

Wow. I never thought of it that way. I think that this is really out of character for Luna, but she still obviously has her wisdom. Now I feel really sad for her...