when do you plan on updating this fanfic? i don't mean to rush you but you haven't made a new chapter since may. also, don't forget to update to fight for honor that is the best fanfic i have ever written i promise. i'm getting really anxius to read what you have in store for to fight for honor. ah! i can't wait!

Hey, I really like this story. Please update soon.

NO WRITE MORE PLZ

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it's really good.keep on updating.i really like jay and nelly.it's very diffrient than the other stories.

aaw...i liked it. i love jay is all getting mushy inside and doesn't want to over her. it's nice to know that he has a sweet side. lol. what's he gonna talk to toby about?? hm...update soon!

I think it's really sweet, definitely not moving too fast.

nice chapter i liked it but i hope she likes jay back... anyway keep writing and try to make the chapters longer.

yay! you updated! i seriously love this story..aww jay! *swoon* :D

cool keep writing and make longer chapters thanks

i love this! i love jay stories...they make me smile. hehe. update this soon!! i love how he's all up in knots over this girl that he just met..

i like this! jay is one of my favorite characters.. *obviously* :D..i hope you continue ..

wow i loved this chapter please write more and please write longer chapters and please read and review some of my stories thanks

Aw... poor stupid Jay!
--“What?!” Jay stood up in surprise. “What do you mean the weekend?! I have things to do! I can’t just hang around school all day! That’s probably not even legal! That’s not fair!”--
That's my favorite line. Especially the legal part. You've gotta keep this going because you've got a good thing going. I really hope that made sense...
Loff,
Jess

wow i loved it please keep writing and please read and review some of my stories thanks.

I like it so far but who is the girl?!