Wow. So quickly , so short! But So good!

Ok, this isn't TDS, but his rather annoying friend/sister in crime! I liked your story of Chris and Rita, cute and witty, but where is the STUFF? IT's to short that the audience is left unfulfilled. LIke all foreplay and no nookie. Left me all wet with no where to go! LOL Keep writing!

*giggles* that was very very very funny

this is a mess up. I tried to stop it from posting.