keep it up

keep up the good work

You kinda dragged it out then rushed it in the end...but it's a good idea.

good story.I love it and hope to read more

haha mayn
first i read the first 4 chapters from
but then the site crashed
THEN i went to but it was the same 4 chapters i had just read
i FINALLY finished it
:]
heheh
AWESOME plot :]

i love the story.

Nice story, I though it was cute. ^_^ I love Sesshy/Kag paring so I really liked yours too. WEll gtg bye.

Not very many chapters, but they
are quite long.

Well-written, great story. I am
surprised that there are not
many reviews, but you cannot count
them, but write for enjoyment.

Wonderful story really and good
like in your future writing.

omg i know its a little late to right a reveiw considering your story is done but wow i love the ending it broght a tear to my eye, haha. well i would like to congradulate you on a job well done and i hope you will have another story, just as good as the last out soon!:P

AW...A happy ending for a happy couple (that sounds SO corny, i know, but bare with me, please)

it's good so far but the ending seem to end too abruptly. Especially the part when they were about to made love and the sentence after saying happily ever after. There's a missing piece in between. Please consider to add something in it or re-write partial ending. Other wise it seem incomplete.
There's strong emotion showing which give character a more alive like. That's a plus.

Your story is really kawaii! Update soon. I'm glad I checked out your stories, b^-^d. If you still need a beta reader, I'd be happy to help. I might miss a few mistakes in my stories, but it's usually easier to spot mistakes on one's old work or someone else's work.

Keep updating and I'll keep reviewing.

P.S.: email is if you want me to read over some stuff.

You my dear are incredible. Beautifully written and damn cute. Also, thanks for putting Sesshoumaru in those boxers. I think you scored yourself one happy muse.

wow such a great story...I LOVED IT OMG IT WAS AWSEOM AND THE LAST CHAPPIE WAS A TEAR JERKER...o.0 talk about outbursts lol

wow it was really good it made me cry.