trapt inside your own body. Poore Jack

All right, I have to admit, I'm a little stumped by this one. Maybe it's only because it's 2am... I love that you have your own style, and this is nicely written, but I'm a bit confused by what's going on here...

So sad, but incredibly well written. This is a great concept (although I hope it doesn't really happen, heh.) It's nice to see some creativeness in this section.

The title's perfect; I'll never be able to think of Humpty Dumpty the same way again. I also loved how you linked in some other characters, and the kiddies sound cute. _

Thanks for writing this,

Aqua