 solojones 2006-08-14 . chapter 1All right, I have to admit, I'm a little stumped by this one. Maybe it's only because it's 2am... I love that you have your own style, and this is nicely written, but I'm a bit confused by what's going on here... |
 unwinding fantasy 2004-12-10 . chapter 1So sad, but incredibly well written. This is a great concept (although I hope it doesn't really happen, heh.) It's nice to see some creativeness in this section.
The title's perfect; I'll never be able to think of Humpty Dumpty the same way again. I also loved how you linked in some other characters, and the kiddies sound cute. ^_^
Thanks for writing this,
~Aqua~ |