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| Scarabbug 2005-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseHey! Sorry it took me so long to review this. I'm loving it anyways. Very Sparx and the last line kinda turned the whole poem on it's head saying that she's just as, if not more confused than he is. way to write poetry! The "I know you'll never love me" line is really sad. I think it's cause we know Ace does love her - just probably not in the way this poem suggests she wants him to. He's more platonic and over-protective big brother than romantic. There see,s a little surpressed anger in there soemwhere but odd enough, I don't think it seems to be towards Lady I... hmm... |
| Lynxie 2004-12-11 ch 1, | abuseYou already have my feedback, but I'll just post to say how excellent this poem is anyways... |
| Blue-Inked Frost 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWell, I've already squeed over this via email, but for what it's worth: Brilliant work, I totally loved it. That was really beautiful. So far you've mostly written adventurefic--plot-dependent rather than writing-dependent--and this was the first piece I've seen from you that had truly descriptive, exceptional writing. (Not to put down your other work which-I-liked-very-much, this piece was just of a different genre.) My favourite stanza was the second, the multiplying numbers and the tears and the reflection was a beautiful image that really appealed to me for some reason. I can see that as the chorus if this was a songfic; when I first read it I thought it was a songfic based on a song written by someone professional. Will stop carrying on now, in case you haven't got the message this is a wonderful poem! |
| Eclair - Homicidal Pastry 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, you have a real talent for poetry, I'd love to see more from you. |