Bravo! You are a master storyteller . . . I can only hope that you will continue to write more on this incredible story . . .

Love and aloha,

Shawne

i want more

aw! this is the best 'Alexander' based fic i've read yet!! You Rock!

Please, keep writing!
Your story is very good, and I like it very!
It would me 'nice' when you could keep writing and of course up-dating!

This is, by far, one of the most amazing stories I've read on fanfiction, and I can't wait to start reading your other works. The descriptions of Alexander and Hephaistion are so detailed, and I love how you write their thoughts as they progress though the story. You have, quite literally, left me breathless, and I can only hope that this is not the end of the story. I notice that you haven't updated in a while, so I fear that it is, but I would love to see this continued.

What can I say that you don't already know? This is amazing, I love it, you're a great writer. *smiles* There? Did I make you smile yet? How about I enjoyed it a lot and look forth to reading more? ;)

Great work! *blows kisses*

Heartbreakingly sad. Great writing.

I love you. What can i say? You're the best of us all. Keep it up. I'd die if you stopped. Okay, maybe a little melodramatic, but really, don't stop.

Non-epileptic seizures?? I didn't knew there were NON epilectic things.. I thought they were just ephilectic attacks.. ior is it the same? I mean, my knowledge on that matter in english is not very good ^^
Anyway.. poor Phai! Itsd kind of funny to see how people think during those days.. I mean, the gods. 8-)... anyway..
Please, post mroe soon! I guess Cleitus'll be dead soon...
Poor him. I saw the movie again like.. 3 days ago.. he's so cute! ^^U
GaB

Loved it - great idea with the seizures. I'll be looking forward to more soon *hopefully* *g*

I'm glad you wrote another chapter and that you are continuing this story. I like a strong Heph and empathize with this sickness. I can see why the brutal physical and emotional trauma would still be haunting him, especially as Cleitus is still alive. I am happy to see that Alexander is rallying around him and showing him love, support and understanding.

Post another chapter soon.

I thought sick Hephaistion is too much for me. He should be a strong warrior at some point.. Hope he will get better soon.

This was a very good story. Poor Hephaestion. I'm glad things worked out.

Are you finished with it? Or is there going to be more chapters?

Oh, i have read the all seven chapters in one day, i have enjoyed so much! I like every one... I was angry to Alexander to take Bagoas when my poor Hef was so close to death...¬¬' Bad Alexander, please, update soon! ^_^

... I love your fic! ;-)

Read the first 5 chapt. in one session... but now I will have a little break. Will read the other chappies soon. Nice evil Cleitos - I have to admit, I like him, because he IS as evil as he is. But this is our little secret. *pst*