I actually read this over at , but I can't log in over there right now to leave a review. I thought this was an amazing story. You made me cry (in a good way). I really didn't expect you to choose the ending you did, because a lot of fic writers would avoid it. But the ending was very strong and it felt right. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Your story is absolutely brilliant! I simply can't tear myself away from it. Your writing style is very unique and quite refreshing to say the least. The only thing I feel the need to point out is the mention of television in chapter 2, of which there is non in the Narutoverse. But since this is an AU (I think), its perfectly fine. I look forward to reading more of your marvelous stories.

I DIDNT WANT HIM TO DIE T_T T_T T_Y but a VERY good chappie in the end *sniffs and runs into the bathroom wailing* :)

Wow... 3 years later and you still get regular reviews. Awesome. ^^ *wonders if you still even read the reviews*
I just finished reading this fic for the fourth time, if you can believe it. xD First time was when it was still unfinished too. It's definitely the fic I've read the highest amount of times. Congrats for an awesome awesome piece of work. :3
... I'll most likely read it again someday

I'm so depressed now! I'm trying not to cry, good job though. ^_^

So sad. I think you should have put this in the angst catagory.

I liked it. At first. I'm not to happy with your ending. WHY?! You can't kill NAU!! He's the star of the show for crying out loud! I cna't belive you killed him! (Hey and also, which of the Naruto boyz/senseis do you think are the hotest? Just wondering.) OMG and you made the stoic bastard crak a joke! Still, i rather liked it. Hope you keep writing! <3

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Hm, it really was a while ago that you wrote this. I read the whole thing. I liked the story, it honestly wasn't THAT original. But it was pretty good. I didn't really like the whole character death thing but it was really the only way you could have ended this particular story. I read the one on adult fan fiction and honestly it didn't need to be on there. I have read much worse fics on this site. I won't make any comments on the grammar and such because you wrote this 3 years ago. Although I will say this you need to get away from the word 'said' because like many authors you use it far too much. Only other thing I can say is to add 'character death' to the warnings in the summary, because many don't really appreciate people killing off their favorite characters. Man, I hope that wasn't too harsh because I did like it. Just not to the extent of some others that I have read. (who happen to have a lot fewer reviews) Hm, looks like I'm done tearing apart your not so bad fan fiction. It wasn't really fun, but I've got to run. (poet and didn't know it) Yeah...

Peace and Love!
~Crazylele1



PS. Don't hate me!

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Beautiful. Tragically so.

My first SasuNaru fic. And I like it.

Fascinating.

Awesome chapter :) Well done :)

Huh. So that's what happened..that was so damn cool, yet a little sad, and I was little proud of Sasuke :D great job :D