 tntiggris 2006-01-25 . chapter 5woa... losers wanna start scool 2 days before summer break?
aww the yaoiness of it all
u gotta love it
~*~T of TNT |
 AbndXAllXSanity 2005-12-04 . chapter 5Really long. Really worth it though! |
 AbndXAllXSanity 2005-12-04 . chapter 4This is my favorite chapter so far! keep it up! awesome job! YAY! |
 AbndXAllXSanity 2005-12-04 . chapter 3Can't wait to read on! keep it up! |
 AbndXAllXSanity 2005-12-04 . chapter 2Really good! Keep it up! |
 AbndXAllXSanity 2005-12-04 . chapter 1Cooleo! Really really really, the longest fic I've ever read! Well worth the read though! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Great beginning! |
 Babybluekitten 2005-11-01 . chapter 5When are you going to update again?Please,Please, Please say soon.Good story so far ^^ |
 Yumi-Ulrich4ever 2005-10-31 . chapter 5*sweatdrops* lmao good chapter it was hillarious. I cant wait to read more! I wonder who the new kids are...and whats wrong with Kai-Koi? hmm...Update soon please! Thank yoU! |
 Kiko cat 2005-10-31 . chapter 5aw how sweet! |
 S. Chensu and Luff 2005-10-31 . chapter 5Mai...you are a strange child.
This chapter was very odd and slightly confusing. Who are the mysterious people? Well, obviously we won't find out until the next chapter but nevermind, the question always has to be asked. At any rate, I'm feeling extremely puzzled now...hmm...
Anyways, I'd better leave you to Tally-kun now!
S. Chensu xx. |
 Kiko cat 2005-08-29 . chapter 4naughty rei!... aw kai blushed isnt that sweet?! i mean sourpuss blushed!
update soon! |
 Lia Xaragi 2005-08-17 . chapter 4VALKOV!
Well it's nice to see everyone awake in this chapter! (oh..no...wait...Kai, start of chapter...damn)
Once again awesomeness is an understatement! Lordy, Max is so naive!! Pure genius, hilarious moments from Max and Ty, I'm liking this Kai n Ray situation too! (no suprises there, eh Valkov?!)
But, who in their right minds would blow up the cafe...? *Hides dynamite behind back* what a silly idea...(heh heh heh, explosions, explosions, everything go bang-bang, yippee!)
Right. I'm thinking of a person. Do they wear black? Yes. Do they drop notes on unsuspecting lovey-dovey bladers? Yes. Is their name TALA by any chance...? Yes? No? ("Maybe? I don't know...Can you reapeat the question?")
Anyway, you have to keep on writing this. With the end of my beloved "Wish Lists" drawing closer *sheds a tear* I'm going to need some kind of Beyblade fix to read. I pass the torch to you, good friend! Keep writing about Ray and Kai! Don't let the flame die out!! *hysterical laughter mixed with tears-Lia's lost it again!*
Well, til next time!
~Lia~ |
 Yumi-Ulrich4ever 2005-07-25 . chapter 4LOL This chapter was hillarious! I laughed during the entire thing! Your writing is amazing! **smiles** Update as soon as ya can!
~Yumi-Ulrich4ever |
 S. Chensu and Luff 2005-07-24 . chapter 4Ya know, now that I understand Beyblade a whole lot better than I did when I first started reading this, it's definitely improved! That's not to say it was crap but that total understanding usually helps in your enjoyment. So anyway...onto the story.
I loved this chapter, especially the fact you put Max in! You may have been nasty to him but at least you put him in there. And you did make me laugh with his little antics! And being late to lessons is a great tradition in Sixth Form, it happens quite a lot. But...who is the mysterious person? I hope they're not too scary! *Cowers*
Your writing skills continue to improve, as does your updating. Or at least, I hope you will continue to update both this and Yamis of Torture. So...I suppose you'd better get to work then!
S. Chensu x. |
 Ivan the Bear 2005-07-24 . chapter 4Jake:yes indeed.^__~That WOULD be interesting.
4IN:Wonderful chapter.Ray is so wired and weird.
Dragzer:yes.Please update soon. |