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| Benesound 2006-05-24 ch 24, | abuseGreat chapter, but I need more. Please. :) |
| Luminous Sun 2006-04-03 ch 24, | abuseHEY! It's been a long time! How've you been doing? Excellent chapter! I expected no less from someone of your caliber. Hope to see more soon! Warlord Harrsk |
| aislinn 2006-04-03 ch 24, anon. | abuseI liked the chapter. And thank you so much for making it so long, it was a welcomed surprise. I got to the andromeda stories homepage and when I saw that this had been updated I was really happy. On a side note, I am hoping that you might explain the whole why the abyss wants pearl a little more, cause I'm kinda lost. Well, I'm glad to see this story again, keep the chapters comming! |
| harper20 2005-12-15 ch 23, anon. | abuseYou suprised me, I thought that Pearl was dead, don't get me wrong I am glad that she isn't. I want to thank you for writing another chapter before you left. I found this story a while ago and thought that you had given up writing it like so many other good stories out there. Well thanks again for the great story and I hope you will write more andromeda fics after you are done with this story. |
| Trancefan 2005-11-25 ch 22, | abuseI love it. Cliffhangers are good. I love your descriptions! |
| benesound 2005-11-21 ch 22, anon. | abuseGreat chapter! But if it was me, after kicking him where it hurts, instead of climbing the ladder, I'd have tried shooting him once again with the force lance. Being in pain and distracted, I don't think he would have been able to tesserected in time. |
| Marebear007 2005-11-20 ch 22, | abusei hate you for leaving me like this! i hate you, i hate you, i hate you! (not really) you suck! (again, not really) yay for rhade for coming to the rescue!...even if he was a little late...UDPATE SOON OR DIE! alyson is my vote as always. |
| LittleRedhead 2005-11-20 ch 21, | abuseNice chatper. Glad to see Gaheris and also it's good to see Harper jack in. |
| lost londi 2005-11-20 ch 22, anon. | abuseNo!Jkin Totally enjoyed chapter, seriously really good she can't be dead though. If you don't update soon im going to come after you like an angry townsperson in a mob torch and all. LOL Joking take your time dont rush a good story. |
| Marebear007 2005-11-10 ch 21, | abusethat's a horrible ending! damn you! i hate you for leaving me witha cliffhanger! the next chapter BETTER be here soon or i'll hunt you down and kick you're cliffhanging **! great job as always! XD UPDATE SOON! alyson is my vote as always. |
| lostlondi 2005-11-10 ch 21, anon. | abuseAll I Can Say Is Wow! Great Job. It was like the best i really really liked it. Dude hope there's more like it. I hope more people vote! |
| Trancefan 2005-11-09 ch 20, | abuseI absolutly love this story. I love how Pearl is developing into a strong character caught between two worlds. And the interactions between Shamus and Harper is wonderful. I like having a version of Gaheris, even if he is different. And Ivory is SWEET! I like how he keeps expanding in ability. I'm sorry i didn't have time to write a better review last time. |
| lostlondi 2005-11-09 ch 20, anon. | abuseI loved it. She finally reuntied w/ her famliy. This chap was so Col. I like Alicia as pearl better than "Willow". But hey that's just my opinion LOL. |
| benesound 2005-11-09 ch 20, anon. | abuseGreat story! Two Harpers? Wouldn't that drive Dylan crazy. :O) |
| Luminous Sun 2005-11-08 ch 20, | abuseAiyiee. Great chapter! Sorry about not updating for a while. Homework and two projects have knocked me off my feet. Ivory's an interesting entity you know...so perhaps we will see more of its capabilities? Anyway, Hello Again! Warlord Harrsk P.S.: Why do you keep changing names anyway? |