I don't mean to be rude, I really don't, but in Claire's journal entry when it said "Oh, and in the last entry, I meant this person that keeps attacking me", I'm sorry but I starting laughing. Its really kind of thrown in there. You could reword it so we know that she doesn't hate Charlie, but the guy attacking her, without being so blunt and obvious. Again, I'm sorry if I came off bitchy, but it was quite laughable...

gah! I luv charlie and I luv him and claire as a couple to much...

luv your fic! i really can't understand why most people think charlie and his flashbacks are boring... i thik he's so cute...

This was really sad...but good. It was really relistic, too. Good Job!

See? I'm so addicted to your writing I am reading all your fics!

That was really good! I hope you update this soon... though it doesn't seem like that will happen because there have been a few more Claire/Ethan stuff... but I hope one day you just up and decide to update this fic. That would be nice. :)

My only criticism is that they DID find the letter "A".

-Bailey :)

Awesome! Great story i wish there was more though:D

loved it! you're a good writer. you did a good job depicting how it might've been for Charlie

Great story. I'm sure you, like me, are waiting to see what happens with Claire. Maybe the fic will continue then, eh?

NICE FIC! Go Charlie, go charlie!

I cried... I hate crying. But, of course, at that episode of Lost, I was standing on my couch, tears streaming down my face, screaming at the TV: "BREATHE!" over and over again. I'm not obsessed, am I?
Anyway, I really really like this story. It has that mysterious angsty vibe, like a proper C/C fic during that episode should.I am definetely goign to check out your other stories.
Love the story, hate Ethan.
N.N.M
AKA: FoolforaTook

Aw, that last line was so sweet. I loved this story, I like some of your other ones too. Just thought I'd let you know though, they did find the letter "A". It was before they split up, they found it stuck to the end of a low branch.

THAT IS OMG AWESOME! MORE! MORE, I SAY! Sorry. But this is THE best LOST fanfic I've read yet! I think this is almost exactly what happened. But I don't think Ethan has Claire- I think he's tracking the person who has Claire. Or it's the other way round. Dunno, we'll have to wait until teh next season in Jan., won't we?
Darn, it's so long away...

~Tristic

Wow! That was really good. I remember watching that on vacation and it had me in tears. Haha! Charlie Rocks! And so does this story. Ethan is my second favorite character (many people don't believe me) in the series, and I hope he shows up some more. I think he could have an interesting character plot if he comes up again. I know you said you didn't want to continue, but heck... you could, you could have a really good story on your hands.

OMG! I LOVED THIS! So great! With Charlie not being in the entire episode until that heart attack giving scene at the end...I was very interested to see people's takes on this thoughts...I mean for the viewers...especially the Dom fans...this was a huge episode...I mean we see him OK in Raised By Another...the in ACHDI...He's being HANGED! That was intense! Great job on the fic! Loved that last line too!

Keep it going. Cant wait for another chapter... you are going to make another right? That chapter was a cliffy and cliffies without new chapters after them are mean! Loved it!