I like it. Can really see Daja feeling/thinking this after Ben's death.

Well, I must say that I don't understand everything here, but I like it. A lot. Its really sad.

omg... that was so sad... so beautiful... i almost feel like crying!!

Your way of writing is incredible. You've used so many imaginative metaphors that it's untouchable.

I really liked the thought that Daja couldn't fix Ben as she can metal. Also, the part where Daja remembers Polyam's talk of sympathy is lovely, too. It all is.

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Wow. What can I say? That was amazing. It was intense and...wow...just wow!

whoah...that was deep, whole paragraphs were similes and metaphors. It made you look at a lone object differently. This was truly beautiful...

that was ...intense, powerful, beautiful and brilliant...