This is original and is good to show to younger writters the mistakes they do, and the shadows is perfect, I mean cant they waist a little bit of time working on the description
and well articuno, thats a good answer.

men WOW is there really fics like that
I am happy to know how to chose good fics
a girl being raped by her bulbasaur wtf
the guy wo wrote that is a shithead

God, the world needed a story like this. Keep going!

XD I love this story, it's amazing.

This is really funny. Are you flaming an actual fic though, because I don't know if you're allowed to do that. That's hitting a little low anyway. Actually, have you ever been to that site "GodAwful Fanfiction?"
You know, if some people actually paid attention to what you're saying in this story, they might actually improve. If only some of them would take this fic as constructive criticism.

Shut up, flamers. If you had any standards at all, you'd know that practically no one can write good fanfiction.

Yet another cool fanfic from Dragonfree. You're the pwn, etc., etc., and I really wish you would continue. It's the closest thing I've seen to an original Suefic parody.

TQftL chapter first, of course.

I absolutely loved reading this one.

I hate you. You are inconsiderate and just don't know when to stop being a loser.
I'ts not an author's fault if they are "bad" by your annoyingly high-class standards.
And don't make fun of 10 year olds. They are awesome.
How things work is all in your head. There might not be any "Fanfiction Character Camp" In my head.
You guys are the bane of imagination. Everyone deserves a fair chance to write what the want to and not be flamed.

Is this an MST? You know, there is no harm in being a bad fanfic writer.
WHY DON'T LOSERS LIKE YOU REALISE THAT!?

Brilliant.
To quote yourself, "THE BEST STORY EVA! CONTINUE!"
I was hesitant coming into this story, I figured, "man, this could be so messy", but it's s well thought out and makes sense and is just wickedly hilarious!
So good, geez, I really enjoyed this, thanks.
Steve
PS - I loved the script-format bit and the use of the word "teh"

Nasty!
I do NOT write about 'Mary Sues' but I do make my characters experience much PAIN.
Not as much as you do.
:)
Ember would kill me, with the battle prowess I gave him.
SO HE'S A CHARMELEON MORPH!
He's still original.
And shiny!
Yay.
I just like Charmeleons, okay?
(At the time of writing, I could not upload my fic. Stupid

Kra.

I thought its not too bad for a first story, but a little too farfetched, and if you were to make a pokemon story, for gods sake don t put mature comments in it, kids read it too.

Gosh, you captured this beautifully. I love this idea. It's so original.

This is like a weird psychological/humorous world which shows the life of a (poor) Mary-Sue. Really shows you have to look at things in retrospect, eh?

-Promesse

Wow! Nice fic. I really hate bad fics, and this fic pretty much says what I was thinking. I like the part about people's reviews and haow the "author" reacted.

I loved the reviewers part, very entertaining.