I am making a guess, it will all turn out to be a dream because you don't like this story! (Evil laugh) Yes I like the evil laugh (evil laugh...yes again!) Also I bet Sora will not bethe cat because that would be too obvious. I bet like he'll dissolve in the water or something and then Sora will somehow be able to save Kairi from Wakka. Hopefully I am right cause I bet $15 that that would happen. (crosses fingers) *mumbles* plz be right please be right. Also You DIDNOT INCLUDE MY SMEXY CLOUD! Why not?! *random person whisperes in my ear* Oh ya, I forgot to let Cloud out of my closet. Sorry.

aha...I like this story.
But I want that cookie, so I'm reviwing now.
And haha...I get the line!
No One Mourns the Wicked, Elphaba, water, not there anymore, hahaha...

You're funny. :]

HAHHAA LOL XD Thats so funny
but the story is suspenseful...i guess

HAHA LOL that was funny
and i love your story
but please dont kill kairi =)

That last part u wrote was funny! LOL XD

Ansem has silver hair, Axel has red hair. Oo Besides that, I love the story! :3

No idea if I've reviewed this before or not, but I luff it!!

Owah! That was not a lame chapter, it was so kawai! Did you write it cuz you were experiencing writers block?, or were you just bored? Oh well, i'm off to spend the rest of my day reading your fave fanfics [i like your taste][not like that, perv] and eating ramen and pocky all day. Scratch that, i just ate my last stick of pocky.Damn. Oh well, keep up your good work!!
Sionara!

Another awesome story from Lili-sama! i have read the rules fo cosplay and it made me want to jump up and down at the ending [not really, but now you and that story are
on my favorites list] I really like the way you wriite your fanfics to make the reader, well, want to continue being th reader! [doesn't it make sense?] Anywho, keep up the good work!

This is the first romance fic I've read in like a year ^^ And it has to be the greatest one I've ever read. I don't care if you didn't like it, because I did. It wasn't too sappy and I liked the nice mix of eerie dark st00fz. You really tricked me with the Sora cat thing too. I'm so cliche that I was going to be sad at the end if Sora didn't come back =P The ending was awesome with Kairi waking up.. Swet. One of my favorite parts was when Kairi went to hug Sora and fell on the dock because he wasn't there. Don't know why. But yes, very awesomely awesome ^^
~Mandy

it wouldn't lemme review on chap14 >< said sumthin about outta range... any way, interesting fic, i must say, liked the ending though

...weird ending, but i liked it!

Well, this was an excellent fanfiction. Having said that, I do have some thoughts.

First off, you had several grammatical mistakes in there.

Second, Those is not spelled thoughs. Barely is not spelled barley.

Thirdly, you got rid of a LOT of punctuation in the last chapter. I suggest (Only a suggestion) that you revise the last chapter with some punctuation (that is, after people are done talking; you don't end like this:

"Blah blah blah" he said.

Anyway...loved this fic!

What a happy ending...NO!You maid Sora like
what,20?You really bug me.I pesonally like shady endings.It was a good story.Why did you hate it.
Oh,I know.Its becase Riku is barly involved.

Riku is somewhat hot...
Tolea

I just read the whole story in 2 hours... wow, it was addicting! But- I have to say, you are my favorite author of KH stories! No lie, but I like your other 2 stories better. Lol, you are too funny with dialogue... bibi!