Great job! Really, really like it. Thanks for writing such a great Max/Logan story. They really are "the" pairing. Hope to read more of your work soon!

I apologize for the delay in commenting on this story. Initially, I was avoiding *all* camping challenge entries, just in case they unwittingly influenced the challenge I was doing.

I *love* this story! I can see Max determined to get the tickets and wanting some company along. Very clever introduction of the tent. I wish there was another installment, as they *do* have all night to talk... :)

Figures Logan would be insecure about her wanting him there, though. Very in character for both of them.

Thank you for doing the challenge!

Have you considered continuing after you finish 'BTG'?

Cheers!
Mouse :)

I know I betaed this, but I'm still ROFLMAO at the thought of Logan and Max camping on the sidewalk while they wait for Max to buy concert tickets. Somehow the whole thought of it just tickles my fancy :)

awesome work, we need a story like this every once in a while to remind us that even if max and logan aren't 'like that' they are still friends. i throughly enjoyed this. keep up the great work!

“Did I ever tell you how we saved Sketchy’s ass…”
-> I loved this! LOL

Wow, that is what I call true love...Spend the night on a line for a concert ticket,sleeping in a tent, in the middle of a side walk! I must confess that I did something like that once. It was a great idea for a great story, of a great challenge. Hey... I had a great day, lol.

cool... more?

Very nice - made me smile.

What a clever idea! Urban "camping" for concert tickets -- who would have thought it. Original concept, well executed. My compliments.

Camping out for concert tickets! I've done that before! Though not with a tent. What a novel way to answer the challenge. I'm trying to picture what kind of beach chair Max borrowed from Kendra. I take it it had no legs since it was sitting on top of the air mattress. Anyway, I enjoyed this. Thank you.

Clever camp site & cool story idea--I had no ideas for this challenge at all, & thought it was 'cos I'm pretty much a city kid. Just goes to show that even a city kid ought to be able to camp!!

Actually, this was the easy part for Max--HER challenge would be to get Logan to go to a rock concert with her! THAT I want to see!!

Fun response to the challenge--thanks!

That was fun, lol! A nice twist on the theme - very clever!

The conversation flowed beautifully - I can't wait for you to finish BTG so that we can get some more S1 stories from you!

I loved Max scorning the offer of Logan's help because she wanted 'the whole experience,' lol.

Hee - the missing work conversation was funny.

Nice touch - her admitting that she wanted him to come then having to cover her tracks a little:) And I loved Max's realisation that the meal ticket line hurt his feelings. She grinned, but her grin faded when she saw his lips tighten at that line. She made a mental note not to use it again. Nice. :)

I loved the matter-of-fact Max - dealing with all his protestations, lol.

And I really liked this: What had he been like before his parents' deaths, before his divorce, before the Pulse and Eyes Only, before the shooting - all the things that seemed to weigh on him now? Very nice!

My only complaint is that it was just too short!! LOL