 TheFifthCharmedOne 2008-12-08 . chapter 1at first, I was turned off by the title, but after I read the summary and was it was a Danny/Sam fic, I just had to read it! I mean, how could you not love the DannySam coupling? |
 Muse-at-dawn 2007-05-02 . chapter 1nice... pretty romantic, and well it was so perfect... very good fic, I liked it |
 Robin*Starfire 2006-06-29 . chapter 1 i LiKed It
iT wAs nIcE |
 Knowledge in the Hollow Noggin 2006-06-04 . chapter 1aww.. fluff... great job.. nuff said |
 x5past6x 2006-04-16 . chapter 1I love this one shot. I love the mood. Everything. |
 Suiadan 2005-11-29 . chapter 1looks good a+ |
 GlowingGreenEyes 2005-11-05 . chapter 1Very cute! I usually don't like this pairing much, but that was well written. Nice job! |
 Lotus-chan 2005-10-04 . chapter 1Ok, I'm only pointing these things out because of how good this fic really was - that and reviews really are supposed to be constructive criticisms. I advise that you go back through it and edit the minor bits and pieces that need it. Like how at the end where Sam says "Can you tell me know?", it should be "Can you tell me now?" and a few more like that. Also, you should change 'He grabbed the umbrella, and headed back into the storm.' to 'He grabbed *an* umbrella ...' or something like that, seeing as how he left his original umbrella behind when he was walking home from school. Aside from these minor errors that another run-through can easily fix, it was perfect and otherwise well written. I loved your follow up on the episode because waiting for those two to hook up is killin' me, so your fic really fed my cravings. ^_^ |
 Bibliophile Music Addict 2005-10-01 . chapter 1Very cute and fluffy. |
 Master of Procrastination 2005-09-22 . chapter 1-squeak- that was so cute...-e-SQUEE!!k |
 Rhana 2005-09-13 . chapter 1This is very good. A bit sudden-like, but still, good. I like how dark it is...being that I have a taste for the more 'darker/edgier' things than the 'fluff' things. (however, I am probably the biggest romance sap you ever seen...> |
 phantomangel 2005-09-02 . chapter 1 i loved it it was friggin' good |
 ghostgirl 2005-08-17 . chapter 1 OMG that was so good
write more
please |
 Live2Write4Ever 2005-05-21 . chapter 1i luved ir |
 rachie 2005-01-23 . chapter 1 i LOVE it
it was written perfectually!
im really hopping ch2 comes up very soon
ur friend,
rachie |