|Reviews for Crossroads|
| WeasleyWizardingWheezes12 12/13/04 . chapter 2
ha! great job!
| Jiggly Wess 12/12/04 . chapter 1
kool. keep going!
| Vengeful 12/11/04 . chapter 1
good start. but is this gonna be NS?
| pseud0me 12/11/04 . chapter 1
This is a good start, but don't be afraid to make your paragraphs longer. You've done a great job describing what everything looks like. Maybe you can work a little on what it feels like, what reactions they might have, how the interact with each other. Keep going, and good luck.
| WeasleyWizardingWheezes12 12/11/04 . chapter 1
Yo! I like it!
PS: HAPPY B DAY GARY DOURDAN!
| orangebronco 12/11/04 . chapter 1
happy happy birthday, from all of us 2 u! we wish it was our birthday, so we could party 2! happy happy birthday, from all of us 2 u, we wish it was our birthday, cuz we want presents 2! Gr8 story in the making, keep it up!