| Reviews for Crossroads |
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WeasleyWizardingWheezes12 12/13/04 . chapter 2ha! great job! |
Jiggly Wess 12/12/04 . chapter 1kool. keep going! |
Vengeful 12/11/04 . chapter 1good start. but is this gonna be NS? |
pseud0me 12/11/04 . chapter 1This is a good start, but don't be afraid to make your paragraphs longer. You've done a great job describing what everything looks like. Maybe you can work a little on what it feels like, what reactions they might have, how the interact with each other. Keep going, and good luck. |
WeasleyWizardingWheezes12 12/11/04 . chapter 1Yo! I like it! love medha PS: HAPPY B DAY GARY DOURDAN! |
orangebronco 12/11/04 . chapter 1 happy happy birthday, from all of us 2 u! we wish it was our birthday, so we could party 2! happy happy birthday, from all of us 2 u, we wish it was our birthday, cuz we want presents 2! Gr8 story in the making, keep it up! |