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Meng Yuan Sun 2007-04-21 ch 1, anon.	abuse"The placid flames of the candles splashed in a current of air."--Pure class! Loved it!
Kami-san 2007-04-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love it. It is just fitting so well the original story and the characters. It is so sad that Sesshoumaru is left alone, and the last of his kind. The way you portray them is impressive, very emotional withouth being OOC. Keep going!
piwqefjk 2007-03-22 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is a great story. I love the way it develops, and the ending is fitting xD
segumisama 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abusebeautifully written. This fanfiction is great. sad, rin dead and kagome dying but good nonetheless.
kitsune-koinu 2006-08-03 ch 1,	abuse^_^
ManonLeChat 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abuseI am grateful to leian for recommending this story to me. It's beautiful, emotional--extremely well written. The characterizations of both Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha, grown and matured by sorrow, were spot on, and the dialogue between them captured the changing currents of tension, grief, even brotherhood. Truly, a great read and a new addition to my list of favorites. :)
Neko 2006-03-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked it a lot! The ending was...unexpected and was kind of like a twist to the story...but it was REALLY good! And I like your ending note...SesshoMaru is frickin scary to write lol I have to agree with you, but you did an AWESOME job at writing him! :D Many Kudos!
emeralddarkness 2006-02-27 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was way good--normally I hate Sess/Rin pairings rather passionatly, but this was actually very good. My congradulations, thank you for writing this. I loved the imagry that you used in this. Gosh. It was just... I can't even say. But yes, this is definatly one for the fav list.
turtlequeen2 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abuseThis is the most awesome portreyal of Sesshoumaru I have ever seen! EVER! Inuyasha is also written very well too. I absolutely LOVED this story! It was also beautifully written and was something I could imagine happening in the future. You have made my day! I was beginning to think that the number of good authors were going down the tubes until I read this. Please keep up the great work!
leian 2006-02-09 ch 1,	abuseExcellent! Great vocabulary - simple yet eloquent! And characterization - spot on! And a scenario that is both believable and so, so works! Well done!
Sakura-Angel2 2005-11-16 ch 1,	abuseOh. This was... beautiful. The concept and the way you approached it were so GOOD, and it really revealed sides of characters that aren't explored very much in the fandom, or in the manga/anime, actually. It was very refreshing. I really like that every line was written with so much description. The descriptions themselves were wonderful, your word choice and combination of words painted a vivid picture. Everything fit. Their characterizations were dead on too. Sesshoumaru's touchyness about Rin, Inuyasha's protectiveness of Kagome... and the way that you showed both of them as vulnerable because of all they had gone through was really (what should I say...) touching? Believable? In any case, it's REALLY GOOD. Just the concept of controlling time like that made for a sadly realistic story. The ending too, of course, was perfect. This was a very well written piece. I think I'll be faving this. Keep writing! Sakura
Syco 2005-10-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseLovely and nostaligic. You could just hear the memories of both good and bad under neath the words. You have the makings of a very proficiant author...says the not so great reader. But you understand what I'm saying. You have a real control over mood, dialoge and characters that makes your writing addictive. I'm very impressed and most happy to have read this.
SilverontheRose 2005-09-08 ch 1,	abuseI cried. I don't know that anything I can say about your story will tell you more than that. This was a wonderful piece of writing, you are very good at evoking emotion. Thank you for a wonderful read.
wallflower-chan 2005-08-29 ch 1,	abuseI love it! It's terribly sad, but it's okay, because the ending made a lot of sense and kind of made you go "oh...i see" excellence! xP
May 2005-05-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story is excellent. A real pleasure to read. For which I thank you.

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