I hated Helga Pataki. For being a bully. Of course I'd only seen clips of the show at the time. The more I learned the more she caught my curiousity above all other characters. A great deal harder to get a handle on than most cartoon characters. She could spark any number of feelings toward her all at once. Praise for being a hero. Distate for her cruel streak. Pity for her love. Admiration for her loyalty to her friend, Phoebe. Regret no one understood her, even kindly Arnold, excepting perhaps said friend. But she was so straight faced she seldom gave any indication that she did.

I guess this scenario is likely to play out as any other. MORE likely than Arnold asking her out. I'm not surprised the boy is playing dense. If I were Arnold I wouldn't know how the hell to handle a crush from this girl. I don't know how his self-esteem surives her courtship.

Now I think about it, how did Phoebe bypass Helga's defences and form a friendship?

Hahaha I can review! (Ignore that was being evil earlier) Ok changing subject now... You got some mad balls dawg! (That means you are super brave for putting this up.) Anywho I quite enjoyed this story... Will there be more of it, or is it just a little one-shot? Well hope to see more from you soon... Peace

Lake

Wow, I loved this fic! Very interesting, and I like the way you write.

Oh my god! I've been looking for this couple forever...like for 4 or 5 years! This story was wow. I'm feeling rather giddy with fluff! Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. *Bows at your feet* _

It's an interesting concept...

I like the way you handled it.

Im not saying that it could never happen, however, im more inclined to be more conservative and not have Helga and Phoebe in this kind of relationship, if you know what i mean.

But i actually enjoyed reading your story. You made it very credible...if it could really happen.

But now...back to the real world with Arnold and Helga, with Gerald and Phoebe.

Huh, first Helga/Phoebe fic I've ever read. I'm sure most would find the concept mighty twisted, at least you had the guts to do it.

A couple words were misspelled however. You wrote 'through' a couple times when it should've been 'though', 'dence' is spelled 'dense', and there is supposed to be a space between 'no' and 'one' in 'no one'. I understand that English may not be your first language anyway, you actually did a good job with the rest.

good story. keep writing, update.

I would suggest putting a warning in the summary for your story for those of whom out there who do not like reading slash. Trust me, the title alone is not enough to let everyone know that your fic is slash. Other than that, it was good, just not my type of fiction...

Wow, that's a twist!

I really liked it, and you're a very good writer- A know that quite a few will read this and flame because it's slash, but you'd better keep writing- I loved it!