great story, will there be a sequel? (hint hint;))

Being rather lez myself, I enjoy reading stories like this. Not a lot of people write Harry Potter fanfiction with F/F relationships, and even less write them well or plausibly. Kudos to you.

Very original! I read this on impulse as I normally prefer the longer stories, but I am glad that I did. A fresh idea handled in a quirky yet novel way - kudos!

Aw! I never would have thought of Millicent and Fleur as a couple, but you projected it so beautifully! Applause!

Ah! I loved this story! This is the first of their paring I've read and it's really good. Much better then I thought it would be. Must be the hag part. Oh... hmm... let's see. I know some words in Japanese. kuso (**) baka (idiot) baka yaro (stupid bastard) yaro (bastard) shofu (**) and many others. Update soon!

Well written! I usually don't read slash, but your story has caused me to fall in love with the FleurMillicent pairing. Fleur and Half-Hag!Millicent do make the perfect couple - although on the outside they may seem to be as different as night and day, looking deeper one can see that they have so much more in common than the people surrounding them. Perhaps that is what makes the couple so appealing - they're so different, yet so simmilar. A perfect balance.

Millicent, in particlar, was a character I could identify with - the strange part is, I don't know why. Because she is being alienated because of her beliefs, or not confident in her looks; all situations I know I've found myself in. She's just so likeable, and proud - despite her outwardly cold nature, I can't help but want to meet her. You did a great job writing her character.

Keep writing - I'm looking foward to your multi-chap MillicentFleur fic! ;)

- Just_Someone

Cool. Very. But the parentals would probably not handle it so well, more likely, they'd blow a gasket.

I think the word that comes to mind is breathless. I like the term '**-spwaned'. I do think your writing has a somewhat mezmorizing quality to it...I read it and all the sudden I am at the end and I feel like I just started and I have a moment of being upset because it doesn't go further. You definately have passion for the subjects. :) Well done.

This is an awesome story! I like how you described hags as being beautiful, that was great. I suppose even things we think of as ugly can be beautiful in their own way. Nice work getting into Millicent's head though!

When I saw the pairing here, I had to look. I usually hate slash of any kind, but this was beautifully poignant. It was a lovely exploration of the minds of two women who are different from everyone else, and find solace in each other. Bravo, and I will never not read something solely because it is slash.

Yeah, that was pretty much american swearing, britsh people are on a whole new level of swearing. o_0

Bloody is usually a substitute for ** and prat is usually a substitute for jerk. Other than that, this was really good, I loved it. Keep it up

This is an awesome fic! It is deffinitely going onto my favorites list ^^ I have never read this pairing before, and I must say that I enjoy it very much! I look forward to reading ‘Sang Froid’ when you have it written. Good luck ^^

-Paige

oh i really like that! the hag-imagery is delicious, in a creepy way *shudders*. as a person who has written dobby/draco, interspecies relations don't bother me much, and i'm very happy to see that you even tackled the speciecism/racism issue. beautiful writing, and such an interesting fleshing-out of a character almost unknown in canon (millicent).

(i am five. i laughed at the draco/pansy banter.)

**, I'm just as un-British as the other people. Can't really help you there...:sigh: Nice story, though. Maybe try saying...hm...bloody hell, bastard, git, things like that. (Update soon)

Wait...I'm not British!