This story had me grinning from ear to ear. It is very descriptive. I could feel what the characters felt. :) Like it!

Wow, that's impressive. It's hard to find good femmeslash, and their relationship is believable and depicted with a refreshing bluntness.

It works great as a drabble, but I'd read more too.

hmm. i like how you described the yule dance awkwardness as a metaphor for lesbian relationships. too sure about pomfrey giving up completely though -- where would be the fun in that for hooch? hooch presumably loves quidditch. competitive-type personality there.