A great story. Very good.

Wow... I LIKE this!

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I'm assuming that Cordelia is in her coma? Anyway, I do wish you'd write Wes' & maybe even Daniel's POV. This is intriguing.

hey good story definitey think you should write a WEsley pov, not sure if u followed cannon or how much of angel did u follow? so a wesley bit would be great.