i really like your vir.

Poor Vir... but this is him, all right. Loyal to the fault, no matter what. Which is why I always loved him so much.

Howdy. Really - really enjoyed that. The closure of Vir killing the keeper is a great idea. Delen and Vir, both people tied to Londo's and Sherridan's fates having this small moment is really poignant.

If anything, longer?

Marc

A wonderful little suppliment to the Legions of Fire Centauri Trilogy. As has been mentioned - sometimes the best scenes, and best fanfictions, are not sweeping epics, but specific explorations of the characters and situations they find themselves in.

This little story contains sadness and strength and softness at the same time and is absolutely brilliant. Thank you!

You did a beautiful job of keeping the characters true. I have found that the best stories are often the ones that aren't trying to be sweeping, dramatic epics- those should be left to the ones who dreamed them first. You aren't trying to change the timeline, or culture a romance that wasn't to happen, or add on- you're simply telling a story like it would be. Three cheers for vignettes!