awesome

It is very much like Draco to personally torture his prey. Though I think I found Hermione and Harry to be kinda off. Probably because it focuses on Ron and Draco. Either that or it's because this is my first time reading a Ron/Draco story at all. Well written, but I still don't think it's processed quite into my brain. But you're writing made it a very fast read! I admire your writing, if not quite the subjects...hehehe. Well, that might change too. I'm kind of a sucker for well-written stories.

what happened in the bathroom between Draco and Ron was SO hot and So sexy ;D

That was cute!
=]
I loved that.
Now I have to do that to my boyfriend.
>=]

I've never really read this pairing before, but this was really good! I just might become a Ron/Draco addict...

That was really good. Please keep writing more of it.

Hot and cute! Draco is such a tease!

oh my, this was wonderful! i'm a big fan of ron/malfoy stuff. you did this exceptionally well, too!
xo, annie

Oh, wow. I absolutely loved reading this; it was pitch-perfect. Thanks so much for writing this piece.

Wonderful. ^_^ How you kept the tension in the first part of the story (a bit too tense for me, too ;) ) and ended it so sweetly... I really had a good laugh reading it and I appreciate the softness of the touches - not something I'm used to. o:)

this is awesome! xD i freaking loved every word.

mm ron and draco~ wonderful story.

I loved it! Great piece of fiction

I am speechless. Your hand with characterization is deft, the prose and humor dead-on. The dialogue was intelligent without being overly snappy.

I know I should be picking out an area for critique, but I honestly can't find anything in this story (except length this should be at least a couple hundred pages longer) that I'd change or could possibly improve up with any sort of advice.

Having read quite a few too-fluffy and ultimately unsatisfying Ron/Draco fics, I was amazed to come across this piece. You make this pairing believable, readable and I totally want more.

This was simply amazing.

This was fantastic! and you deserve a longer review than I have time to give, but it's basically along those lines.