FOR GOD SAKE TELLME THERES GONNA BE A SEQUEL(Gasp)epic just question did the whole hair thing with death goddess mean jaks. DEAD? I loved this dtory you did a brilliant job advancing the charcters please umm maybe you could do a halo3 Master Chief/OCromance fic? BAe honored i just. typed all that shit out. On a. Nook touchpad it aint easy. That also counts for my horrid grammar and such for this

Nice pun. Although...why not GREY JAK! That'd be unstoppable. Like Dark and Light Jak mixed. Dang...thats almost not even funny...

I just hope Aithne stops hating Jak. I also hope that Cyren and Aithne have a chance together.

YES! Hell to the YEAH! Keira/Jak reunion suckas!

haha...I so saw it coming. I KNEW Aithne was listen! I guessed it! Really I've got alot of the things thats going to happen in this story figured out. :D

Holy CRAP! That was intense to say the least. That can't happen. If Mae dies Daxter might as well ask Jak to shoot him.

Awesome! I had to see this part. I figured it'd be the best part of the whole darn story. XD

YAY! This story honestly just got SO much better. I hope you know you basically messed up favorite ANd my second favorite character..not my third is a POW. My 4th is not really even doing anything so...Daxter is my favorite,then Jak,then Keira,and then Sig.(Sigrid XD I still can't get over that name...it SO doesn't fit him.)

Haha...I can already tell you be a pretty cool person...after you got over the um...how do I put this...Insanity. Thats it. Yup. You're funny...extremely random(I'm having flashbacks of the time my friend screamed"CUPCAKE ICECREAM AND PINEAPPLE SAUCE! In the middle of math class XD Funniest thing ever) More Jak! Sweet! Its getting...better. I just wanna see when Jak and Aithne meet. I hope Aithne accepts him and doesn't turn him away. And uses 'Aithne Hagai Mar'.

WOOT! YEAH! JAK'S COMIN BACK! at least...thats what you said in that response to a review. XD SWEEEEET! Hes been through and seen so much more shit than anyone else in Haven,Sage,and The Holy City can shake a stick at. XD I love that saying...

I don't like most of the new generation character,Maelia,Aithne,or Cyren. Their all...messed up in their own way. Mae is just hungering for affection. Aithne is too messed up to list. Cyren is...pretty alright. Hes pretty much a teenager thats shy and has a strict father. Lol. Ryu DOES has small problems,but they don't seem to..weigh on him as much as Aithne and Mae's do. I like Ryu though. I'm still pissed at you for the lack of Jak. Unless something half-ass happens in the next chapter then I'm just gonna be done with this story.

I hate Aithne. I hate how jak is gone. Seriously,I'm not flaming here...maybe a lil about the Aithne part. As far as the part about there being NO Jak whatsoever...HELLO? Thes tory is CALLED Jak IV: Penalties Of War.(Emphasis on Jak) Not "Jak's Friends and Family IV:Penalties Of War." There. I think I've made my point.

The more you dilly dally with leaving Jak out ENTIRELY the more pissed i get. Yes. I am incredibly impatient. XD

Just be glad I don't shove a sword in your gut for leaving Jak out of this for SO long.

*gasp* Warrior's Wives...it could be a TV show! XD Lovin' the story. Maybe some parts from Jak's POV? That WOULD be nice...