Even in French we said "a happy end" lol and here it's a big one.

As i said before I like your story. I would like to see Kyle more and I didn't really understand what Jack did to Roxy but in spite of that this story is great !

I really like Roxy. And Jack is fun "Mission 1 of the master plan completed" lol

The 'declaration' sound also good. Maybe Jack has a romantic way ? lol

Well... I'll try to change... Very nice ? lol

great :)

I'm a French reader who is fan of Complete savages and i try to let you this review so forgive me for the bad translation -

Just to say this history is great and I like your idea. I also like the behaviours of the savages boys. They really soud like them.

It's great! I'm going to reag the other chapters :)

Oh I like your fic,so cute

lol this fic was cool.

i love this story. its great.

I love a happy ending :-)

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Its not that bad. It has a good plot.

Hmm...Jack walking downstairs with plans with three different girls definitely does sound like Jack. I like the whole whenever they end up talking they end up fighting, it's perfect tension. love it, update!