update?

oh. good chapter. more please

ek. exciting start

Good chap!

Intriguing... Looks like it has been awhile since this was updated (6 months); is it abandoned? Hoping not...

ok i am guessing this is set in the first time jack stuck his head inside the ancient database hmm seems like it could be good look forward to the next part

An odd little story which, on the surface, shouldn't work but, in actuality, does.

The descriptions of the situation and the location help greatly in acheiving this and keeps momentum going.

Only problems:

The constant use of the term "Oy", which cheapens it's comedic value and the fact that the writer claims it isn't ship.

It IS ship as far as I am concerned.

9/10

Xander McEwan

you drink coffee? didn't think so maybe your jack clone is making coffee for me! very good!

That was good. Please write more soon.

This was highly amusing.

Well, actually I think your comments about your Jack clone were most amusing, but the story ain't half bad either.

So don't keep us waiting too long, or we may lose interest in his kosar.

I love Jack. Great first chapter btw. I can't wait for chapter 2! :)

"Sam gazed up at the stars above." I think you're doing it on purpose now...

Do you really want me to write a fic with Sam and a small guitar and singing?

(ANd anyone who's ever heard 'The Owl and The Pussycat' knows what I'm talking about, and knows she's doing it on purpose!)

Good first chapter. :)