Wonderful imagery and lyricism - in a dark angry way.

Makes me wonder, was his love Hermione? Lily? Someone else entirely?

I have enjoyed both your other fics. Keep it up.

Gr I wish they would create a feature where an author could reply to a review...
While yes this poem is for the HP universe, it is about Remus Lupin and... well any woman you can think of, though I had Lily Evans in mind when I wrote it.

I really enjoyed this poem. I'm assuming that as it is Harry Potter oriented the characters are Severus and Hermione, however I could be mistaken. "tortured and tormented by what I become
what I never wanted to be
what I have no choice to accept" has to be one of my favourite lines. If you moved the rating down, you might get more people reading it, I didn't really think it held anything R rated. It was excellent, like all your writing.