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unknown20troper
2009-08-04 . chapter 7
I love this fanfic.

I recognized your versions of Cosmo and Wanda's kids. D'aw!

I would have liked it better if Norm and Desmona's kids were there too, but I know that Norm wasn't on the show yet when you wrote this and despite your vast talents, you are not a fortune-teller. (Yes I already read all your FOP fanfics, but I'm reviewing them chapter-by-chapter anyway.)

I like the end-of-chapter short.

Cosmo: Aw, isn’t that cute? They’re not even married yet and they’re already having their first big fight!

Was the cutest!

Cosmo is hard to write (I know; I've tried) and you write him awesomely!

The tl;dr version of this review is:

THIS FANFIC IS PURE AWESOMENESS!
unknown20troper
2009-08-04 . chapter 6
This chapter is so sweet!

Everyone is in character. I never knew Vicky could be that sweet though. Well I guess anything could happen with a bit of reality-warping magic.

I love your end-of-chapter things! You are one of the few people on this Earth that pulls them off well.
unknown20troper
2009-07-20 . chapter 5
This is great!

Jorgen is in character and is an interesting ghost of Christmas future.

Trixie has bratty twins with rhyming names (that reminds me of when someone said on the Timmy/Tootie pairing forum that Timmy's kids were Tootie's because they were nice) and Veronica is Vicky's secretary. The "I AM TRiXIE!" was an good reference to canon.

Vicky finally decided to redeem herself after seeing what her future self did. She wants a second chance now! Will she get it? Well, let's read on and see!

Nice end of chapter short.
unknown20troper
2009-07-20 . chapter 4
Nice job.

Everyone was in character.

Timmy and Tootie sure did a nice thing for Vicky even though she does spend her time torturing them. Her heart seems to have grown at least one size that day.

The end of chapter short is in character and I LOVE your references to canon.

Wanda's comeback at Cosmo for bashing her was made of sheer win! "Fairly Odd Parents" fans have wanted something like that to happen in canon for centuries and since your fanfic is so FOP style, even if its an AU now, that is almost as good as it happening in canon. (However, if it happened in canon, it would actually be able to effect canon.)
unknown20troper
2009-07-20 . chapter 3
Good chapter.

You didn't make Vicky's past too angsty, like most people are prone to. She was really in character in the flashback.

Timmy and Tootie playing together in Timmy's room was cute.

You got Cosmo and Wanda down.

The end-of-chapter short still rocked!
curious
2009-07-20 . chapter 7
that was amazing one of the best stories ive herd to tell you the truth i almost started crying somewhere in the middle of that. i really like cosmo and i like the way you described him in here. you must be a really big fairly odd parents fan. but i am really busting to know who was her husband?

i think that the writer of fairly odd parents should have used your charachters for cosmo and wandas kids instead off poof.

your story is awsome!
unknown20troper
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
This is good. Cosmo and Wanda pretending to be past evil babysitters is interesting. I like the comments about cliche. Overall, this is good, In Character and FOP style.

I like the character's conversations at the end of the chapter. You are the only fanfic writer who pulls them off this well.
unknown20troper
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
This is great.
You got FOP style down and everyone is In Character. I'm glad you don't think Trixie is the worst prep alive.
I can tell that Vicky is in for quite a bit of trouble. Timmy does help Tootie a lot, like he did in "Birthday Wish."
LittleBlue33
2007-05-19 . chapter 7
very cute story^^ cute and funny^^
digigirl27
2006-05-07 . chapter 7
awesomest story ever! i love this story! very good details!
RayElaineFan
2006-04-26 . chapter 1
This was great. I enjoyed it very much. Good Job!
ravengal
2006-02-04 . chapter 7
Hehe great story. ^_^ I got a laugh out of it here and there and I love how much the future changed because of one simple little wish. Also, the characters were so IC!

Well, that's about it from me. Sayonara x
Tiffany
2005-10-02 . chapter 7
Hi, I'm Tiffany.. I saw your pic from "Behind the Musician" on deviantart and decided to check out your fan fic... It is so cool. I really wonder who Vickie married.

A couple of comments.. First of all, I like how you made certain references to episodes of the show in the story, like how Cosmo and Wanda are the Turner's neighbors in the house above them. I also like how you made Timmy and Tootie get married, because an episode of the show (actually, Channel Chasers) would be contradicting this if you didn't. (At the end of Channel Chasers, they show Timmy and Tootie with their 2 kids)

There are 2 things I don't like though... How did Timmy remembered his godparents when he got older? Isn't he supposed to forget when he turns 18? And you should have spell-checked the story, there are some grammar and spelling mistakes in it.. but otherwise I loved the story. Great job!
Firefly4000
2005-09-18 . chapter 7
awesome story^^ lol i had many a good laugh because of it^^ keep up the good work
KwazyKandyPie
2004-12-28 . chapter 7
aw, how cute! ^_^ I'm looking forward to any future stories you'll have. :) aw, and Vicky, she's nice!! ^_^ wonderfully written story, i loved it! -kwazykandypie- (AKA Kelly)
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