The summary of the story sound very interesting. I've always loved stories when Harry turned dark and such. But the excitement was short-lived...

Beginning with your overly long description of the school with so many useless information that we didn't need to know right off in the first paragraph. How you repeatedly say that the school is the *best* blah, blah. The more times you write that, I just... it just ruins it for me. One time is enough, please.

“I’m about as eager to go ‘home’ as a cow is to get branded,” Harry replied caustically.

Oh, god. I cringed at this spot. Harry is talking to his Headmaster not his friend. And no matter how well they know each other, you don't say things like that especially to someone so much older than you. I mean, would you say that to your school principal? I wouldn't. That would just be too embarrassing for me. I mean... nevermind.

Okay, next. Harry's speech. This is the last straw for me. The final break that made me stop reading. For every one line the others speak, Harry speaks 5 times. It's like an unbalanced conversation, know what I mean? What I'm trying to say is, Harry just talks too much. And too smartly. It's as if he's so important and they're just wasting his time.

And please don't underline thoughts and/or dialogue. It's just not right. It brings me out of the story right away.

Now...

Harry didn’t bat an eye, “I wouldn’t do that if I was you Malfoy, the consequences of breaking the Anima corona promitto are quite unpleasant from what I’ve read and you Malfoys are as vain as peacocks.”

For someone who's speaking like a king, he sure need a tutor for his grammar, eh?

Well, that's it for me.

woah, cool- powers, knowledge, and a changed personality with an actual explination! yay!

although why does he have a transformation?
eh, hopfully you'll elaborate later, i think this is going to be a good story :)

Simply delicious. I hope things get better for you in real life soon. I'm putting you on alert so I hope that when you someday have the time to write the sequel to this wonderful story it will be posted on . Good luck and even though time and energy are lacking, you have talent and I hope you can keep writing, even if it isn't fan fiction.

ruthless and complex.

Super powered Harry stories get a bad rap sometimes, but when its well done it can be wonderful. You did a great job of addressing JKR's issues creating some interesting twists. And the new ones merged easily in.

This main character did / does a lot of things that pushed my personal buttons, but the story was reccommended to me strongly enough that I kept on reading and was able to put aside my issues and enjoy the story for what it was.

I think I'll go look for the sequel.

It's been almost 3 years and we still haven't seen the sequel to this story. You've started other stories here and on your journal but never even completed this series! It's very frustrating to just leave readers hanging on, especially for the length of time you have, and expect them to want to read other stories you may write.

I'm very disappointed as it was at times difficult to continue reading this story, and now that I have completed it, I can't even see how everything ends!

Finish what you started or pull this story completely as it just lures a reader in and then leaves them hanging.

How to find Precarious Destiny? Is it not up yet or you didn't post it in ?

I tried to hang as long as I could i8 can not go on good luck with your writing

You craming to many things in at once and you havall these things just hanging loose ends etc

How long is this story?

I am looking forward to the next chapter

When will the sequel be update? i can't wait.

I really love this story! Are you going to finish it?

hi! i'd like to know when you plan on posting the sequel to irreversible destiny?

A, this story hasn't been updated in three years. *pouts* I just reread it. And it was AWESOME! I mean, the first couple chapters were a little sketchy, writing-wise, but it cleared up really fast. Thanks for this wicked fic!
Mirage

hi my name is Gabi and i love your story so far. regarding the question on what i know about nc 17 cut outs i can only say if your story wasn't as fantastic as it is i wouldn't have continued reading it. i love all things with details and i must say i have some very..how do i put it?..in depth sexual encounters in my stories that have been posted since two years ago i believe and they haven't been taken down by ff net. so if that was what you were asking about then that is what i know. but whether way continue your story its bloody brilliant. oh and you can always make a live journal and put any scenes you believe to be adult type on there with the link on th bottom of your chapter or where you put the usual cut out.

Gabs an ever lasting fan!