 kovu 2006-09-24 . chapter 1 that made my heart melt- and not just a little! ^_- |
 cleo 2005-05-01 . chapter 1 That was really good. One of those short mushy things that makes me wanna shake Yuki's hand and tell him how lucky he is. Nice move, Shuichi! This one is particularly good in giving Yuki that mixture of romantic but not sickeningly sweet. I imagine that if they were to make a continuation of Gravitation where Shu and Yuki have firmly established their realtionship, this is just how Yuki would be like. Good job. |
 clari chan 2004-12-24 . chapter 1aw! Kawaii! This such a cute fic! It was really well written too :D |
 Jillybean89 2004-12-18 . chapter 1Lovely! I wonderful start. I like it already. ^_^ Please update soon. |
 Hoshi-Hiru 2004-12-18 . chapter 1how cute! |
 tangerine-asuka 2004-12-13 . chapter 1so sweet! i love this kinda sweet one-shots! |
 Sliefoxx 2004-12-12 . chapter 1*warm fuzzy feeling* Like you said, "Pointless one-shot" but cute non the less. ^_^
you really should write a story though. I think your fans would enjoy it. |
 keito-kyokun 2004-12-12 . chapter 1aww ^_^ how cute! all your stuffs super fluffy! ^_^ |
 Kadzuki Fuchoin 2004-12-12 . chapter 1Yes! I'm the first reviewer! Does that mean I'll get some reward? (hint)
Love it, love it! Shuichi is so adorable! I wish I could pinch his cheeks! Ne, Hiro, not only I have cold hands, but cold feet too! Does it mean anything?
Write more! And you don't suck! (hugs)
Kadzuki |
 Arizosa 2004-12-12 . chapter 1*sque* That is so beautiful!!^o^ aw Shu an Yuki mah so cuteums!!
*thumbs up* wOOp!! |
 Whispers of a Ghost 2004-12-12 . chapter 1O.O DUDETTE! You dedicated a fic to me! :: bows:: I am forever your eternal slave...if only on :: sweatdrops::
Aw...This story was just perfect. We all love pink puff balls and cold stoic writers, what's not to love? There are only a few typoes, but then again I make a few myself, so I can't really talk. ^.^() It has great form for lacking a beta reader, though. Really nice, well-written piece.
This is going on my favorite's list. THANK YOU. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to dedicate the sequel to my latest fic " Sticks and Stones" to you. :: scuttles off after pressing "review" button:: |
 Ildreen Love 2004-12-11 . chapter 1AW!
So sweet!
Not much to say, except that I loved it!
And that Hiro is the best!
Hehehe, nevermind that, write more soon!
Ja ne! |
 coconut-ice22 2004-12-11 . chapter 1'Fanfiction dot Net.' so, i understand that you CAN use a fullstop, as you put one in just after you said that, but why put 'dot'?
'ColdHeartedBastard!Yuki and FluffyPinkHairedIdiot!Shuichi' LMFAO! long enough description? *giggles* pinkhaired... *continues to giggle*
'‘It’s the only bit of warmth I get’,' *pouts* awws! nos! *huggles the Shu and gives him a Weasley jumper*
PMSL! '“Humm, that’s nice. Has he had a hair cut yet?”
“Don’t be silly, Yuki. Hiro’s hair is really pretty long; he’d just look weird with short hair. Y’know, I can’t imagine Hiro with short hair, that’d be just too weird, and he suits long hair too! It goes with the whole ‘guitarist’ image pretty well!”
' easily distracted at all??
Aww! and Yuki tells him off for it! how cute!
*launches into lecture about homeostasis and vascual diolation* ohhss... he means warm heart as in loving! *cooes* only Shu could possibly think like that.
>insert the girly squeal i gave at the end< Awwss! just! *sniff* so FLUFFY! Yuki shares his body heat, and Shu shares his love. That way the excess of both! keep them all in perfect harmony! Tis so cute-sie!!
And in finall note, something is better then nothing, no matter what lenght it is. And if there was ever a big mistake in your work, you so know i'm to much of a ** not to point it out to you fifty differnt ways, and 'nit-pick' it all to death.
Hehe, Shu with ickle girly hands, rofl... Big hands mean big gloves! never forget that! So until next time... |