 Tokyo Blue 2008-06-18 . chapter 1Wow. That was amazing. Well writen. Just wow. Not fond of the ending but I think it does suit it. |
 Not G. Ivingname 2008-01-10 . chapter 1 I just reliesed that beast boy got over terra BY THE NEXT EPISIODE, GET EDITING, HAPPY VERSION! NOW |
 Not G. Ivingname 2008-01-10 . chapter 1 What the heck? she killed herself? rewrite the ending, get him tharapy! I almost killed my self for how it turned out, and why could she not just use her powers to help him? flames, if you rewrite it I will change my review |
 Twillight Bunny 2007-12-20 . chapter 1Wow...man this is awesome *sigh* |
 Quitting for now 2006-06-17 . chapter 1So...this story earned you a spot on my favorites list. :) |
 wonta be a gost 2005-05-02 . chapter 1 you use to many big words...nice fic
love:wonta be a gost |
 Ivory990 2005-04-26 . chapter 1omfg this story is amazing it makes me wanna cry this is an amzing piece of work write something soon I read this story everyday (not joking you can ask my sisters)thats how wonderful it is its like a good book that you keep picking up no matter how many times you've read it.(T T) gonna go cry now bye. |
 Raven Byrde 2005-04-17 . chapter 1This is probably the best "After terra's death BB/Rae" fic I have ever read. And even better, you didn't stick to the old and you did something new with it. It was really sad, but I'm glad I read it. You're on my favourite author's list. |
 Jini 2005-03-10 . chapter 1That...was really sad. I almost thought BB would actually find it in himself to realize that maybe he loved Raven just as much as he loved Terra (maybe even more). But...seeing the ending, I guess not. Still very good though.
I salute you on a job well done! LOL.
~Jini |
 dismal dellie 2005-03-08 . chapter 1I must say, I really enjoyed that fic. It was a nice change from the run of the mill coupling fics. Also it seemed more realistic in terms of how the characters dealt with their losses and emotions. Very well thought out and well written. Much kudos to you. |
 Miko-of-Jades 2005-02-28 . chapter 1 Oh... man... How can BeastBoy be so selfish? Poor Raven. I was at the brink of tears, thinking how BeastBoy could actually think something like that. She gave herself away to him, for him, and all he thought about was himself. This was... wow... |
 Riana1 2005-01-02 . chapter 1I rarely ever read Teen Titan fics, most of them scare me and make me want to tear out my hair by the roots.
I am very sorry to say this because I have read your other fics and was blown away by their quality, but this is not your best work to say the least. You are a talented writer which why it was so painful to read this fic. You have a poor grasp on the characters but some of the best exposition I have read.
Neither Beast Boy or Raven are presented as inheiritly weak or depressive indivduals in the show; Raven might be morose but is hardly waeked willed enough to suicided over a bad love affair.
It frightens me that you see suicide as a romantic response to unrequited love /but he has no love to give her in return, so of course the only answer is suicide./ It is insulting, degrading, and a pathetic attempt at pathos.
I am sorry if I seem harsh, but you have a terrific natural gift with words. It deems you to use it to put works like this out there. |
 Draco's Secret Lover 2004-12-31 . chapter 1Wow, this was quite, quite good. Very deep, very tragic. And I definately agree with you about the most tragic part. I wish I could write something this good. |
 Evil Bunny1 2004-12-28 . chapter 1It's perfect. Horribly depressing, but perfect. |
 kitty 2004-12-14 . chapter 1 this fic is so sad... i love it. |