U WANNA KNOW WHAT WE THINK? HUH HUH? OKAY U GET MAH POINT NOW...

i love it n_n sry i couldent stop mahself... i really really really really really really like it plz make more its so good

make more faster faster!!

neko

Bloody hell this good! Update when you can 'coz this is a very addictive story.

Oh! poor Tala! I can't wait for your next update!

poor Bryan he's like a drone. but I still loved it

Poor Bryan-kun... :sob:
I've liked ur fic a lot, its really original ^^ They re so all so cute "kills Boris with a shotgun and then starves him to death - nah...too soft =D"

i luv it keep goin!

haha... lol
i got a little idea.. try to a voice in tala's head that will make him feel realli bad.. or he'll try to kill himself because of it.

it's sad too... keep goin.

very sad... i like it.

good storey carry on x

aw!! great chapter i've been waiting for it 4ever!lol update soon!! cheerios!

It's very twisted, I must admit and it does make sense, according to the scene where we see Cyborg-Tala, in the series.

I'm glad to see you've made a return with this chapter. It leaves me anxious for more and does spark some of my creativity. Thanks, and I wish you the best of luck with inspiration for the next installement.

I admit.. I am sadist that delights with the suffering of Tala... what can make? Beauty doesn't exist without cruelty, and your fic it is that ^_ ^ thanks for your effort in you continue fic

aw it was just getting to the good part hey why don't ou put a rape in there or something

its intresting