|Reviews for Harry Potter and The Unheard Voices|
| Azza 2/3/11 . chapter 1
I suggest you re-read anything you write, a lot of the first chapter didn't make sence. Please get a beta to re read and correct any mistakes even after you read it. Spelling mistakes are a killer of reading such fan fiction, this caused me to rage quit from this story and I don't plan on reading any more. Sentence structure is also a large factor in not pissing of readers! Finish your studies of the English language then consider writing a fan fiction. Also, If you plan on writing a story with Harry as the main character, make sure some part of your character is based on Harry, not a Mary Sue that can do whatever he wishes and you think should get with Draco.
| belle A Lestrange 5/30/10 . chapter 8
aw poor draco
| dragoness simplicity 6/2/09 . chapter 5
The secret gardens? seriously? *raises eyebrows* Why didn't they just goto an unused classroom or something? Maybe Next time try to aviod making up places that don't already exist in the 'Harry Potter' novels. It adds to the realism.
Otherwise good. _
| Jessica 11/23/08 . chapter 18
That was a good story.
| twighlightangel61090 7/22/07 . chapter 18
wow, this story was good. it was a little weird in places but overall the idea of the story was very good and it was very well written. you really did an amazing job with it!
| Seto Kaiba's My Babe 8/15/05 . chapter 18
"lemon-drop flavored crumpets"
This was a brilliant story! Loved it- and can't wait to read more of your work!
| fifespice 8/14/05 . chapter 18
oh wow that was awesome and harry saved the unheard voices too cool this is so god
| Tainted-Blood3033 8/14/05 . chapter 18
Hey babe its Laure. Like the story, Keep it it, the chapt was funny! Luv, laure
| Psychotic Yaoi Lover 8/14/05 . chapter 18
I loved it. The whole story was terrific, I'm tryin to get one of my friends to read it, but she's being mean right now and won't listen to me. Oh, well. I'll just keep buggin her about it. Well, I hope you right more stories soon.
| koolmint26 8/14/05 . chapter 2
ok this is a really good story i like the badass harry it's so hot but yah
I gotta finish this story
| fifespice 8/13/05 . chapter 17
wow I loved this chapter i like that athella decided to help when no one else would please update soon
| Pure Black 8/13/05 . chapter 17
| Jujube15 8/12/05 . chapter 17
Love the story. Harry and Draco just seem so sweet together. :) -
| Niveous Lilt 8/9/05 . chapter 16
omfg where the hell are they?by the way loved this chapter!
| fifespice 8/9/05 . chapter 16
wow that was good but what on earth was dumbledore thinking? and how on earth did draco end up beside ahrry whereever he is? please update soon