I suggest you re-read anything you write, a lot of the first chapter didn't make sence. Please get a beta to re read and correct any mistakes even after you read it. Spelling mistakes are a killer of reading such fan fiction, this caused me to rage quit from this story and I don't plan on reading any more. Sentence structure is also a large factor in not pissing of readers! Finish your studies of the English language then consider writing a fan fiction. Also, If you plan on writing a story with Harry as the main character, make sure some part of your character is based on Harry, not a Mary Sue that can do whatever he wishes and you think should get with Draco.

aw poor draco

The secret gardens? seriously? *raises eyebrows* Why didn't they just goto an unused classroom or something? Maybe Next time try to aviod making up places that don't already exist in the 'Harry Potter' novels. It adds to the realism.

Otherwise good. _

That was a good story.

wow, this story was good. it was a little weird in places but overall the idea of the story was very good and it was very well written. you really did an amazing job with it!

Jess

"lemon-drop flavored crumpets"

XD

This was a brilliant story! Loved it- and can't wait to read more of your work!

oh wow that was awesome and harry saved the unheard voices too cool this is so god

Hey babe its Laure. Like the story, Keep it it, the chapt was funny! Luv, laure

I loved it. The whole story was terrific, I'm tryin to get one of my friends to read it, but she's being mean right now and won't listen to me. Oh, well. I'll just keep buggin her about it. Well, I hope you right more stories soon.

ok this is a really good story i like the badass harry it's so hot but yah

I gotta finish this story

wow I loved this chapter i like that athella decided to help when no one else would please update soon

good!

Love the story. Harry and Draco just seem so sweet together. :) -

omfg where the hell are they?by the way loved this chapter!

wow that was good but what on earth was dumbledore thinking? and how on earth did draco end up beside ahrry whereever he is? please update soon