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| Warstock-Leonhart 2005-01-07 ch 6, | abuseHey, Now i think I know who Nic is though it took me a good 5 minutes to understand it(brain bit slow). Well it's a good story and it,s a bit short but I love the way the battle was done also the shot of fire and thunder. Well i will be here for the next series beleive me. Well with all due respect, the orange ranger will go now Orange ranger Dino thunder power-up Warstock |
| CamFan4Ever 2005-01-07 ch 6, | abuseAwesome ending! Can't wait for more! |
| BlueCrimson4Ever 2005-01-06 ch 6, | abuseAW darn its the end but it was an EXCELLENT EXCELLENT ending and I can't WAIT for the next series! |
| BlueCrimson4Ever 2005-01-04 ch 5, | abuseWell another EXCELLENT EXCELLENT CHAPPIE as always!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! |
| CamFan4Ever 2005-01-04 ch 5, | abuseAnother awesome chapter! EVIL! Please update soon! |
| CamFan4Ever 2004-12-31 ch 4, | abuseOOHH! EVIL! Please update soon! |
| BlueCrimson4Ever 2004-12-31 ch 4, | abuseEXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT CHAPPIE!Can't WAIT for the next one so PLEASE hurry...oh and I think they came face to face with Josie! |
| Sergeant Scarlett 2004-12-23 ch 3, | abuseHey again! I ain't reviewed your stories for a while, shame on me! This is an impressive piece of work, just one thing to point out: Do try not to put author's notes int he middle of the story. If you're trying to explain something why not simply put it into the story? For exmaple instead of this; (just so you know, these three students are the ones that held her down and tied her wrist, there was only one girl in the group), you could put: Three of the students were male, who held her down and the other was female. See how easy it is? Other than that, a good read so far. Oh, and Happy 14th Birthday for the 10th of Jan. I remember my 14th as if it were yesterday...well, actually, it was only four months ago...LOL miz~g |
| Warstock-Leonhart 2004-12-22 ch 3, | abuseSorry if I haven,t reviewed in a while, been busy a bit. I want more, it not nice to left us wauiting for what that note said and I kind of liked the ninja fight. I surely hope that this Josie would get her butt kicked once more hehe(sorry to all who likes her). that's good work and I,m already waiting for others chapters. Farewell and happy birthday(advance or not), merry X-Mas and happy new year if i don,t see you. Warstock |
| CamFan4Ever 2004-12-22 ch 3, | abuseAnother awesome chapter! Please update soon! |
| BlueCrimson4Ever 2004-12-21 ch 3, | abuseEXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT Chappie!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP and EARLY MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
| BlueCrimson4Ever 2004-12-21 ch 2, | abuseEXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT CHAPPIE and thanks for the dedication*Tear of happiness*!Well PLEASE HURRY with the next chappie!1 |
| CamFan4Ever 2004-12-21 ch 2, | abuseAnother awesome chapter! Please update soon! Happy early B-day! And have a Merry Christmas! |
| crimson kittycat 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abusegreat start. please update soon. |
| BlueCrimson4Ever 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseEXCELLENT EXCELLENT START!PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN AND HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY! |