YAY! Macbeth and Raven...it fits! I liked this. really.

You write the coolest fics! The imagery is always so great~ =D

It's not poorly written! I swear it isn't! I admit some parts could be improved upon, but generally, it's quite good.

(Or maybe my expectations have been lowered from the poor quality of FE fanfiction. Sigh.)

Perhaps it's just because I haven't read Macbeth, but the plot and details seem very unique to me. Rarely have I seen sulfur describing something, and a new description excites me like a new car.

(Okay. I lied. I'm writing an essay at the same time I'm writing this, I'm in the lying mood. But it still excites me.)

The fire as the heart was a prettyful analogy... I do like it.

In fact, you did so well with such few words that I dearly look forth to, maybe, a bit longer of a one-shot?

(And you don't mind if I advertise, do you?)

Pretty good...and it's not BAD like you warned us it would be. Wow, it must be terrible suffering from insomnia. I only do when I'm terribly nervous about the next day. Nicely written, very descriptive, that's mainly what I look for. (and I'm not one at all -.-)

Wow, imagine. I never thought I'd see a Fire Emblem re-enactment of Shakespeare. Well done. But although life IS short, it's still something you can call your own. That's the important thing-- the concept of freedom.