I certainly hope nobody flamed THIS. It doesn't deserve it! Nice work, and that last sentence was the perfect ending. One thing, though, the word you kept using as a synonym to "fail" is spelled "lose", not "loose". "Loose" is the way that something fits, like loose clothing. Always be sure to proofread your work, so that it can be even better. ;) I hope you write more stories similar to this.

That was wicked. Cruel. Meaningful. Very nice in both the plot and the writing skills. You got potiental. It's hard to write a dark story but I love to reda them.

I think this story brings out how Slade's true character would be. It was good, I always love stories that center on Terra. With the way Slade treated her, no wonder she went up against the Titans so feircely. Good story and good writing.

If I said "almost beautiful in its own sick, twisted, guts-and-blood disturbing way", would that make any sense? ...Luckily, I don't give a shit about making sense.

Terra's emotions were displayed perfectly. Plus, Slade was just as morbid, insane, and unforgiving as he is on the show. (Somehow I tend to romanticize him.) *timid BAA and shrug* So the "good characterization" catagory is passed. Yippee. Points for you!

A story with decent spelling and grammar was well appreciated after the load of cruddy alphabet soup I've already clawed my way through today. MORE POINTS! WHEE!

And of course, I love the premise in general. Fantabulous idea and well done! You write Terra so well!

xSJ:)

I like it.

no wonder Slade cant hold onto an apprentice ;). that was awesome, now i know wat i can do wen im supose to be working in tech. go to your page and find more of your stories ;)

If anyone flames what you write about, tell them what any normal sane person would. ("Fuck off bastard")

If anyone flames your writing, tell your readers. WE WILL REVOLT AGAINST SAID FLAMER AND FLAME THEIR FINGERS FROM HERE TO CHINA!

That means your writing is great. :-) Seriously, it's awesome. I knew I could find something like this somewhere. PERFECTLY done.

Queenie

that was a pretty god story and was creepy. like really f*ing creepy. keep it up i loved this story!

That was definately out of the ordinary. Not what I'm used to in terms of TT, but nonetheless it wasn't bad, though it did sound a little better from the reviews and the summary. Then again most do...

You. So. ROCK! That was amaxing. Terra/Slade! I never thought I'd see the day.

Slade is one messed up guy, but he still kicks ass as a villain. And if I owned the cartoon, Slade would have been the villain in third season, too! But I don't. BooHoo.

Do you write master and apprentice fics often? Because if you don't, you should write more. But you should also try to explain Slade's thoughts more deeply, it would give your stories a bit of an edge.

Dark Dreams,

Lady of Faerie

I love your work and this was no exception. You captured Terra and Slade's personalities perfectly. There is no doubt in my mind that this could have happened in the show/really.

I think you should do way more dark Terra stories.

I appreaciate your good grammar, which is hard to find here.

You captured Terra's feelings perfectly, better then anything I've ever read/written.

Looking foward to more of your stuff,

Terra Logan

Wow.I was deeply impressed.I wonder why no one else write creepy Slade/Terra fics.I luv 'em. So,anyways...good fic! keep it up!

Thos story is so... intense and real. I absolutely love it! Terra does deserve this and the way you wrote it, she does have no regrets. Please write more!

Wow. Wow, wow, wow. THAT IS SO FREAKIN' COOL! I usually don't like it when people write Slade as cruel (well, more cruel tha he is in the cartoon), but this is awesome.

0_0 I DON'T BELIEVE IT! YOU STOLE MY IDEA!

Heh...you still did a much better job of it than I could. Much more brutally. Ouchies. Poor Terra.

It also sounds a bit like one of my other charries, who is currently residing in a notebook of mine and will take some time to appear on All in all? THIS CAN'T BE A ONE SHOT! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU! I'LL LICK YOUR SHOES! I'LL SERVE YOU CAVIAR WITH WHITE WINE! JUST PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, UPDATE!

-Whew...I don't normally beg like that. In fact, I don't normally beg at ALL. It shows you how desparate I am.