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| Dionysos 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abusefor your first lime this was very good! |
| Whitewingzero 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseYou make me want to eat some chocolate...Now! |
| me 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! that was so hot!! PLease do more fics on athrun and cagalli! |
| shiloah18 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseno biggy.. it wasn't bad.. it wasn't bad at aLL.. ^^ man, Athrun.. you just couLdn't hoLd back, couLdn't you? especiaLLy if it's CagaLLi.. *giggLes* "He risked another glance from his monitor towards the love of his life. Or the two loves of his life in this case." lol XD suteki ichi! did Myrna/Mana find out?nyWeiZ, suteki deshou fic! ^_^ P.S. if you're an AsuCaga fan.. I encourage you to view this URL: yeah, I know it sounds siLLy.. demo, who knows? that it might actuaLLy work.. jaa ne! :) |
| hiba 2007-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse...wen u said u made it better i thought u might hav added sex but no...fine but its a waste of a gud story though, also it would be much better if they took the ice cream into the bedroom and if u acctually wrote sum lemon but gud overall!! keep writing more stories! (but add more lemon..im like obsessed):P |
| kenkao7rocks5forever 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abusewow, nice for a first try! and waay hot with the pouring-all-over-her-chest thing! i like it... ^_^ |
| Keeper.of.the.Moon 2006-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abusevery naughty tsk tsk *grins* |
| cagalli-rox 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseathrun is such a pervert lol good story though |
| Athyra 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abusehot, hot hot! So...GOD! Even though it's only lime...it beats most other lemons! |
| Sumomo92 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseWow...what a naughty Athrun, great story and I hope you do good in your future ones!^^ |
| FirstxKiss 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHow devious of you. XD |
| Sea-EnigmaDare 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuse*winks* not bad and quite an interesting approach. Seriously made my heart run and hope you don't mind if I experiment with your idea ( with your permission of course ). Keep it up and great job *hugs*. |
| AsuCaga30 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abusehahaha... nice storY! HOPE YOU COULD MAKE MORE ASUCAGA STORIES!! ;] |
| MyouseiSeed 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOh.. how romantic!! I read this like 1 month ago but I forgot to put a review!! Kira Yamato+Lacus Clyne, and the #1 couple Athrun Zala+Cagalli Yula Attha (yeah #1!) rocks!! |
| ashwings101 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseNice lemony ice cream. It was fun reading it. MAKE ANOTHER ONE! XD |