lol it's really a good story kinda funny too, plus it's better if u make it longer it well be great :)

for your first lime this was very good!

You make me want to eat some chocolate...Now!

WOW! that was so hot! PLease do more fics on athrun and cagalli!

no biggy.. it wasn't bad.. it wasn't bad at aLL.. man, Athrun.. you just couLdn't hoLd back, couLdn't you? especiaLLy if it's CagaLLi.. *giggLes* "He risked another glance from his monitor towards the love of his life. Or the two loves of his life in this case." lol XD suteki ichi! did Myrna/Mana find out?nyWeiZ, suteki deshou fic! _

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jaa ne! :)

...wen u said u made it better i thought u might hav added sex but no...fine but its a waste of a gud story though, also it would be much better if they took the ice cream into the bedroom and if u acctually wrote sum lemon

but gud overall! keep writing more stories! (but add more lemon..im like obsessed):P

wow, nice for a first try! and waay hot with the pouring-all-over-her-chest thing! i like it... _

very naughty tsk tsk *grins*

athrun is such a pervert lol good story though

hot, hot hot! So...GOD!

Even though it's only lime...it beats most other lemons!

Wow...what a naughty Athrun, great story and I hope you do good in your future ones!

How devious of you. XD

*winks* not bad and quite an interesting approach.

Seriously made my heart run and hope you don't mind if I experiment with your idea ( with your permission of course ).

Keep it up and great job *hugs*.

hahaha... nice storY! HOPE YOU COULD MAKE MORE ASUCAGA STORIES! ;]

Oh.. how romantic! I read this like 1 month ago but I forgot to put a review!

Kira YamatoLacus Clyne, and the #1 couple Athrun ZalaCagalli Yula Attha (yeah #1!) rocks!