This is excellent! Well written, and in character. Please finish the story? Please? *puppy dog eyes*

Love this.
very in charactor.
sad and funny.

I still think you will finish this story! I have faith! By the way, I love the picture you gave us a link too. Shuichi still looks adorable.

It has been a very long time since I last read a Gravitation fanfic, and I loved this one to bits.

Please, keep writing!

it is gorgeos! please? i want it more!

love. love. LOVE this story!
I was slowly getting back into the Gravitation fandom and your story has just made jump, head first, al the way back in. I love the angst and Shuichi's indecision with well, everything. And Yuki, poor poor Yuki, he's still so screwed up. I'm glad he finally just grabbed Shuichi and kissed him. I like Atsushi, I really do, but I can't really like him because, well, Shuichi BELONGS with Yuki. But I suppose Shuichi needs him so he can see that he needs Yuki. At least I hope.
I know it has been awhile since you last updated, but I'll continue to check your page just in case.
Thanks for writing such a captivating piece of fiction!

Wow. This story is amazing. I went against my rule about reading unfinished stories, and I'm glad I did. This story is awesomely beautiful, a I truly hope you continue it. Great job!
~Wanderer

i seriosuly love this story.

homg. A very interesting story. Seriously. I skipped out on doing homework to read all the chapters you have so far.

This is definitely one of the more interesting stories I've read in awhile. Definitely one of the best invovling Yuki and Shuichi. I'm torn between wanting them together or for them to forever be apart.

For real. I can't wait to read an update

I...I don't know what to say. As silly as it sounds, I'm desperately in love with this fic.

I couldn't imagine myself liking a fic about these two being broken up, with Yuki being the one to go after Shuichi... I couldn't imagine it to be well written or in character.

But that was before I read this fic.

It's like a good book, one that you can't put down until it's over.

I'm still holding on, waiting for the -- how shall I say -- ending credits to roll. Heh.

I'm holding you to your promise of finishing this. Please, please keep it.

I am holding you to the promise that you WILL finish this! It is truly excellent, and I just HAVE to find out what happens!

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Whoa, that was so incredibly hot it's unbelievable. Beautiful and effective writing as usual!

As soon as I saw "with eminent grace" I remember the good time I had reading your fic and was very happy you updated. I like your story a lot and hope you will update soon.

OH oh oh... oh no... oh Shuichi... ohg Yuki... I was so glad to see you had updated :) I just love this story but oh... the angst and the sadness and the lack of communication O_O Oh Shu... and Yuki I think my heart breaks for him knowing he's totally ** up here and doesn't seem to realize it...

thank you so much for updating so looking forward to next chapter!

Whoa, that was a way way way hot chapter. to be honest i cant exactly remember what transpired before this chapter but i enjoyed it nonetheless. Perhaps this calls for a dued reread? Anyway, i do remember that I love Atsushi (for some reason) and the whole forceful Yuki. Damn Canon. Anyway ta-ta