You need to write more! And soon! LOVE IT!

i like ur story so far. im plannin on writing one too for this movie. lol update soon ^_^

hey are you going to finsh this story? I like it. Could you finish it plez? its well wretten

Please update. I absolutely love this story just like I love Barry Pepper. The writing is great so please continue.

Do you think you will ever finish this story? I found it quite some time ago and occassionally check back, on the off chance you might have updated. Matty was my favorite from the movie and I enjoyed his and Taylor's friendship immensely. I think you've done a fantastic job so far and I'd love to see the rest.

please write more, quickly. I'm enjoying this

This is looking really interesting, hope you write more.

Hm...more intrigue. I definitely like the direction of your story! Keep at it!

I'm sort of confused. First would Taylor even FIT in a Civic? And you have them living together i can get that, but the way you wrote it i can't determine if Taylor's just being that helpful best friend matty relies on or if thier about to start a makeout fest on the couch. you said that "Things were actually beginning to look up for the kid." Like taylor was his older brother, which really doesnt fit, because matty's almost thirty in the movie.

I'm hoping that if you update this, you'll fix it so I can understand. please?

You've got me hooked-please keep writing!

Dude, your story is quite good. I mean, Taylor and Matty were best friends and if you stopped it here and didn't make them gay, which I know is coming from your disclaimer, this would be really good. I don't understand why every loving friendship portrayed in movies has fan fic writers turning the two friends into a sexual couple, but that doesn't change the fact that your writing is good and your style is ok. But Matty was supposed to have a girlfriend in the movie, they cut her for time. He's not gay or bumping uglies with Taylor. I just don't get why people get off on slash, but that's MHO.

I respectfully disagree with the previous review. I have seen Knockaround Guys many times, and I think that you are doing just fine with this piece. That is not that I think that you will take the previous feedback negatively. I know that you will not. So, keep writing! I will keep reading!
~Sandra Leigh Alapton~

Have you seen the movie Knockaround Guys? Because there is no Matty and Taylor from the movie in that fic except the names. I suggest you watch the movie before you write to get the feel of the characters.