a good portayal of a grieving mother.

AWWWWWW!

HOWWW SWWWEEEEEETTTT!

Short and sweet. And dark. Is that even possible? Anywho- Wonderful story. I can't even begin to imagine how hard that would be. Absolutely wonderful. )

I like that last line alot! That is a sweet story. Mmm, Eyes. Oh, Eyes. God, I LOVE people with blue eyes! MMMMMMMMMMMM! I read "Jedi of Blue", and I can agree. All those Blue eyes!

I love the last line.

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Oh it was wondefully sweet and sentimental and maternal. I loved it plain and simple!

Oooh, spooky Force premonition! Poor Amidala ... I love the way you can get into character's heads.

Coolio. It's kinda sad though...

how sweet. very enjoyable. (you've got a few spelling mistakes in there though)

You overuse the word "darling" and there are a few misspellings and grammar errors. But otherwise, excellent job. I really loved it!

A sweet little story. Be careful with your grammar (spelling, punctuation, etc.)...it helps a lot not to have those little distractions. :)

I couldn't write like this.

That is a really groovy story. I like it- Alien

This was really sweet and I liked it. Although now I'm sick of the words, "darling" but oh well.