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locket-girl 11/14/06 . chapter 1
Aw that was so beautiful. I loved especially the end and of course the whole fic. I enjoyed how Ferio and Eagle played cat and mouse with her at first.

It's too sad they can't be together.

Again its such an awesome and tear-jerking story.

You are simply awesome.

Bye! niara01

Take care
kazuna 10/3/03 . chapter 1
That was so sad I cried. Will you write more Umi/Clef things like this?
shnickers 9/9/02 . chapter 1
Wow! This is really good. Yeah, you should get a beta reader. There's a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but hey! No one's perfect. You should definitely do a "Labyrinth" ficcie with Umi and Clef. I'm currently doing one too, a Fushigi Yugi one. _
Jackson 4/7/02 . chapter 1
OKay, I haven't read any yet, but I read the first paragraph O' what U said, and I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL! OVA Clef is HOT ::sighs in thought:: No one really writes about the OVA's...it's kinda sad, but yeah, I'll go read your story now...bye
Avium 1/17/02 . chapter 1
Perfect for me - none of those over-sweet happy endings (although I sure wished that this had a happy ending @_@).

You made me check out 'Labyrinth' because of this. Found the soundtrack and loving every moment of it!

And PS again - I drew a pic of Umi and Clef, don't know if it's good enough to send to you as a prezzy...
ShadowMistress 11/30/01 . chapter 1
*cries* that was sooooooo good! I'm not much for Clef and Umi pairings, but you just did it so well! *sniffles* Clef is so hot...
Zoi no miko 11/12/01 . chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwwweeeeeeee! *SNIFFLE*

*snifflesniffle*

It's good. _

*sniffle*
Mother Love 7/1/01 . chapter 1
BAHAhahahah its me again! Good Fic! I havnt found much OVA stuff eather. Nothen good anyway. And who didnt love that movie? Curse that David Bowie. I blame him for my umm...unique taist in men. *cough**cough* ...AnyHoo...it was GOOD! As always. Keep it a comming hon! (I'm tired can ya tell?) Pooooooooo!
shampoo ul copt 5/24/01 . chapter 1
That's sooo sad, but sooooo good!
universal twin ryoko 5/23/01 . chapter 1
thats such a cute story
Fruitloop 1 5/21/01 . chapter 1
I loved the Labyrinth. I also happened to love that one part... *far away look* I enjoyed your ficcy... A LOT.
blahdeblahblah 4/3/01 . chapter 1
Wow... that was great. Such a lovely story and so sad. It just kills me when there isn't a happy ending, but I loved it.
Lucia 3/23/01 . chapter 1
Wonderful Story! I thought it was beautiful *wipes the tears from her eyes* Umi and Clef are my favourite anime couple
Flor Moreno 3/17/01 . chapter 1
You should know that I love Clef/Umi fic 'cause I think they're great and must end together, And You should know you are a GREAT writer, please keep working. I would like to read your version of Labyrinth with the MKR cas, just please dont pair Ascot with Umi, pretty please.
Rachel 3/15/01 . chapter 1
I think your story to me is very well done. Also it was very tragic and sad to me. Though it still was a beautiful story. I always hate when love can't work. No offense of anything but its just to beautiful to let it slip away and never do anything about it. *sniffle* Well great story! Keep writing and well its an awesome story overall!
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