I've read all four chapters and all of them have been great so far...I hope someday you can continue with these stories.
I can't wait to read what happens next in all of them!

That was another Excellent Chapter! Really enjoyed the romance and the birth of Sara--Things were certainly different back then, fathers had to remain out in the waiting room and smoked, not like today! Love the name you gave to SHUSH Special Headquarters Universal Safety of Humanity! That was very imaginative! I can see why Cyrus is reluctant about joining SHUSH, especially since he has a wife and child now, but James is a wonderful friend and he certainly wouldn't talk his friend into do something that would risk his life. As he said, Cyrus would be doing the same thing as he does for the University, only get better compensated for it, work towards world peace, and get appreciated for his efforts!

Great Story!! You're an AWESOME AUTHOR!!

That was an AWESOME CHAPTER! I really felt like I was on the battlefield with Cyrus and James Hooter! I think I have gained a whole new respect for J. Hooter, because of his military background. I really do picture J. Hooter with a military background before he came to work with SHUSH. I liked the bravery of Cyrus and how he saved Hooter from the snipers.

That was very romantic how Cyrus fell in love with Mariko!

No need to be sorry!! Like I said, I just couldn't put the story down, and besides the walk did me a world of good!!

Aw, poor Sara, it's an unfortunate reality that many soldiers who are also police officers go overseas to fight enemies abroad, only to come home and be gunned down in their own backyard. I felt so sorry for Sara to lose her father.

That was a really great and tense scene between Darkwing and Griz, Darkwing did cross the line, and now he feels guilty. You really captured all of the characters true natures!! I am excited to read a story about Dr. Sara, and it is one of the Darkwing characters that we really know little on her.

That was a most excellent first chapter, and I agree, there is not too much fanfics out there on Sara Bellum! You've got Darkwing's personality down, for he does explode when things go wrong, and he never did have much patience! Like Steelbeak's accent in My Perfect World, you've really got Griz's accent down PERFECT! That was so nice of him to console Dr. Sara like that after Darkwing's explosive personality! I really felt so sorry for her!

I certainly CAN'T WAIT TO READ ON! ANOTHER EXCELLENT STORY! In fact, I was so into this story that I missed my bus stop to my parent's house in South Trenton; I ended up in the next neighborhood, but after completing this chapter, it was well worth it!

Very good chapter. Aww, Mariko and Cy had their baby. Aww, Sara is so cute. I wonder what Cyrus will do next. And I wonder what happens with these decisions. Very good job. Keep it up.

Great job. The part where Cyrus was hiding was very intense and believable. Seems like you put a lot of effort into this chapter, and it was worth it :)

Great Job on this chapter. Great narration and very touching scenes.

The story is back! Yay! Hoping to find out more about Sara really soon.

This story is really improved over the last. There seems to be better flow to the dialogue, which helps, and the added information clears up a few questions I had. Good work!

The only comment I have is that I think you are playing with Gryzlikoff's language a bit too much. I know, I do it too, but there's a line between really expressing the way he talks and making the actual language incomprehensible. That isn't to say that I think what he says doesn't make sense, just that I have to think a minute to translate his accent. You might consider toning it down a little for the sake of easing up on your audience, but by no means do you have to. It was just an idea.

Well done over all! And do please continue! This is a great story and it has wonderful potential!