A little boring but not too bad...

Well, Link and his daughter are headed to Hyrule now. Looking foward to what awaits them.

Wow I wonder why I didn't see this before, I need to start looking at updated stuff more often.

Anyhoo I really like this so far, never saw the first version so I can't compare on improvments but it's written pretty well so that's all good ^^ I love the Link/Saria pairing.

I have a question that jumped out at me as soon as I saw something though. You say his daughter is 16 but he left 15 years ago? How does that work? If it's a spoiler just yell at me or something but yeah it just struck me as a contradiction.

Wow! great work. Looking foward to more.

Aw com'on man...And just when it was gettin good...Ey, wheres that sequel to Stealing Back Time? I really need something to read.

I LOVED IT! XD

Ack! I haven't reviewed! Bad Tai, bad... *slams her head on a table*

I have repented! *Owz...*

Ano, it seems like a good solid plot so far. I'm kind of confuzzled at some parts *It's a side affect of being me...*, but otherwise, 'tis an excellent ficcy.

Yeah, that probably doesn't mean much coming from me *Points to large 'Mediocre' one forehead*, but even though I'm a somewhat lousy *Okay... mostly lousy...* author, I'm a fairly good judge of talent. And, so far, I can tell you're pretty damn good.

Still... that doesn't mean much comin' from me, neh? =T_T= Damn my patheticness to a thousand hells... *sniff*

Welp, please update whenever you can.

~ Tai

Awsome! You need to update soon. I love this story!

Hey, Maieve! It's me from school.;) I won't say my name obviously, but anyway, good start so far! I wasn't able to read all of it because I've got chores to do, but what I read was pretty good! You're very descriptive in your writing and also use a balanced amount of diverse descriptions that make it quite interesting. A few spelling and gramatical errors here and there, but it is hard without spellcheck.;)

I'll be back to read the rest soon!

demons? sound interesting!! Wonder what that guy meant with "weapons and souls tainted with blood"...demon blood? Anyway, please continue! I want to know what happens next, and I want to see the confrontation XD

One word describes this story... Awsome! What?! It is. They're gona look for Link! Are you changing some things from the original story?

I wonder what Zelda's dream is about. And I wonder what this new evil is, and what Link has to do with it. Anyway, please update soon :) I'm dying to know what happens next!

This was a lot better than your first. You added more detail. Anywho update please.

Great story!! I really like Zelda stories.

oh this is really interesting so far! I wonder what this darkness is!
'dad', does he have a son now??
anyway, please update soon! I like this so far!