i love this story its so well written and every ones side storys come into play with each other you should continue this story ive got to know what sakura was talking about...

PLEASE keep going! I am now offically hooked to this story :)
GOD BLESS!
Hikari no Minerva

Please Continue!

This is one of my fav chapters of this fic cause Minoru is BACK! But i just want to PUNCH Sasuke for saying those things to Sakura!
Im beggin ya, please update! this is my favorite fics of all time and i've read it over and over and over again and im so curious as to what will happen next!! so if you have some spare time please write another chapter, even a short one, heck, an authors note would make me happy!

Aw, jeez. Man, I love Gaara. And I totally DO want him to get laid. He like, deserves it. But the way this ended, with her so eager to get the mirror, made me so sad! She needs to be careful with his feelings. She doesn't have to disappear with the mirror, he'd probably give it to her--since he was looking to get rid of it... But mostly I'm just worried about HIM, and how easily she could make him feel betrayed, and he does not need to go through that... :(

On a lighter note... loved the Hyuuga stuff. What Naruto said WAS way overboard... actually, I don't think I even read all of it, I got to a certain point and my eyes automatically snapped ahead a few lines. ^^" It was funny though when you said Jiraiya's reaction was 'like someone just offered free drinks!' or however you put it. Made me laugh. xDD And Hinata's so cute... being so scandalized! And then reacting so maturely after the scream! 'Naruto said something... very inappropriate' I was impressed.

I wish Sakura would let herself fall for Sasuke again. She irritates me, being so indifferent. But it's not REALLY indifferent... I don't know what I mean by that exactly. It's... jeez. 5am. Talk about insomniac (eh, I'll probably pass out after I post this). When I started reading earlier today I was on chapter 16. @_@' I don't think I've stopped reading since then either. @_@' So you will just have to excuse my lack of brain power.

Man, I really am tired. I'm going to bed. But first, nice story. Please continue!

WO SASUKE! HE *CAN* BE SEXY! *Squees suddenly* I just LOVE his scenario. GIVE IN, SA-KU-RA! You know you WANT to go along with this.

["I get to be inducted by the Yondaime Hokage?" Naruto pumped a fist upward. "Friggin' AWESOME!"]

OH THAT WAS COOL! And here I am (SHAME ON ME!) cringing at the prospect of his appearance, even as ghost in a story WITH ghosts. (I've just... honestly... read too many bad stories. Just before I started this one I read one where his dad was alive INSIDE HIS HEAD. And it was just... excruciating. I can't help but cringe at this too...) But Naruto gets to CLASS CHANGE *sques* And it's actually COOL that his dad gets to do it.

And obviously, I LOVE Naruto's reaction in that quote!! :D

It's... kinda cool that Naruto gets to get a darkness upgrade. Seriously. And you reasoning is good--obviously he does deal with the kyuubi too much for 'lightness'

OH GOD! I thought you said you weren't going to write any smut! That was straying a little far into the territory don't you think! *sweats*!

Aw, but I LOVED it when they TALKED. OMGOSH.

["I'll kill you in your sleep for that, Usura-tonkachi," Sasuke mumbled.

"No, you won't," Naruto chimed, with a hyena-like laugh through his teeth.]

Oh-he-he-ha! You make me laugh so much! Seriously though, I liked that whole scene. xD Sasuke got a back massage AND FLIRTED, Naruto got GROPED, and then that LINE. Nice, nice nice.

And this ["God friends!"] was cute!

Aw, I seriously love this Naru, Saku, Sai team-up! SUPER entertaining! EVERY TIME!


Also... I had meant to comment earlier that I'm an idiot for not realizing that the girls were in an illusion and you weren't attempting to upgrade Hinata's temper enough to have her kill Potamos... But her temper has definitely been upgraded. ["I don't like you," she stated in a matter-of-fact tone. "But I won't let that hinder my work."] Very un-Hinata like xD

That scene with the wolf youkai was adorable!

Oh, wow. I have to admit... the Class Change thing is cool, especially with Sasuke. That's a WAY more interesting, even attractive twist on the curse seal's nature than what it is in canon.

Hinata... seesh. OOC much? But yeah, no, I know she's been through some EXTREME stuff VERY fast. And she can't stay the same innocent girl forever..

Okay, this is getting VERY interesting now.

Oh thank god, I figured it out! Wow!

So... how did Hinata get there? I had this (crazy?) idea that her dad sent her there to hide the fact that he didn't actually give her the seal... And that maybe the old woman is gasping at the end because Hinata's head is perfectly fine? But what Hinata was thinking toward the end made it sound like she left on her own. But that doesn't make sense... Since when she woke up the last thing she remembered was getting the seal. I'm confused. @_@ *reads on*

I liked it, the scene with Lee and Sakura :)

Oh, god. And that's not something I can ignore either and not review... I just have to say 'woah' at the end of this chapter. Wanting Hinata to have a curse seal! I'm so horrified at just the thought! It's so awful to me to even imagine it!

Well, at least now they know. I didn't like it when they all thought she was weaker than she was and I've been just waiting for it to all come out.

Also, I'm glad that Sasuke is how he is right now--emotionally & how he's behaving normally.